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The Intro.

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Don't Cross a still river, Cause Currents Wipe Ya away...
You In My focus... i'm the Current Snipa Ta Day...
I Hate To Point My Finger & Start Sayin Names..My Sparks Slayin Lames...
i'll Leave Um In The Dark..Layin..Mayne..


I've Been Relaxin & All When i Realized haters Wus Straped Ta My Balls..
I'm Like O Shit NOT AGEN!..This time Homeboi GOT A FRIEND! & He's Repetative
Like Company Executives..Till It's Respect you Give... Don't Expect To Live..
I Murdaed you Once..It Can Happin Twice.. K.O. you Then have ya Traped In Ice..
4 a Third Round In The NEAR FUTURE...Who You Gunna TEAR LOSER?...
We Can All Tell HE NO THUG! Plus his Man Look Like a LATINO DOUG.
My Move Forwards Stunnin Da Clowns..We Gotta Cock Suckah RUNNIN AROUND
Who'll RUN IN A ROUND..But Claim's A Throne..i'll Flame Da Phone...
It's A Shame Ya Clones..Won't Fall Back & Leave My Name Alone....

This Aint Punches Off Tha Wall.. I'm Offin Yall...
i'll Have Ya Soul In a Coffin Stall'd... No Movin.. Bro's Cruisin..
Past These Hoe's Snoozin On How I Grow Usin..Defeat As My Own Gym....
You Couldn't Stop Me With Chrome Limbs..Ya Bright Zone Dims....
As I Crush Ya Brain.. Like a Rush Of Caine..I'll Have The King Flip..
Like I Blushed A Game..My Fingers R Debree Cause I Touchd Da Flames...
You Began Ta Bring, You've Set Ya Self Up Fa Death Like Suicidal Doods Who Plan'd a Sting..
On Themselves, Waitin For Detecs To Let Tha Hammas Sing...
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Post by The Gonz »

Whats this an intro to? lol. Shit was nice, had some good multies, flow is consistent. Seemed like it was keyed. Reminds me of Lil Wayne.... just playin lol.
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Post by Haz »

A Intro To Slaughter LOL.
Thanks 4 The Feed Homie..
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Post by Viral »

dis was pretty tight...good multis n flow...could just be me..but its a subliminal..haha..da second half i thought was better than the first...keep doin ur thing man
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Post by Brah-Vo »

didnt take much to tell this was a subliminal.
But this was overall a good, all-rounder piece.
Flow was tight and i really enjoyed reading this.
Hazard always manages to bring some swagger into his text which makes it more readable then most of the stuff dropped here.
keepup.
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Post by Kurse »

Pretty interesting read.
If anything...I'd assume this was directed toward KO and Ekoms.
But I could be wrong. When the shitz subliminal...it's hard to say sometimes.
But personally...my opinion, if you're gonna go hard...
...you gotta let niggaz know it's thrown at them! Show you ain't scared to give away your position on the battlefield! Know what I'm sayin!?
Only time you use subliminal is when you got sum fame and buzz...
...and don't wanna promote them niggaz and give them any shine.
But if you're on the same level...
...then subliminals get kinda pointless.
Not a bad drop...it'd just be easier to plug the peices if we knew where they were headed!
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Post by Haz »

Thats Why it's Called The Intro
It Was Meant To Be Subliminals..
Don't Worry Its gunna Build Into Somethin More.

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