A Dark Christmas Day.

[Def-init]

Xmas, a dark day.
Bills piling...causing dismay.
Don't mean to spit a burden. But I harden this way!
This my version of 'Jedi's' "Black winter day"
Ayo, envision young Rudolph's nose
Too much blow or did he lose a fight?
I guess Papa Santa abused him at night!
Kept him on the street hiding high, 'flying' at night!
Mama Clause, the perfect wife.
Her perfect present was the perfect pipe.
Turkey in pan on the counter generating rust
The kitchen broom in a corner collecting dust
She's Alone in a room high from shrooms and rock
"Knock, Knock", Uncle Frosty at the door
The 'snowman', cold and frigid.
'Polar Ice' the item he tricks his kids with
And remains the dude her kids choose to look up to.
Beholds his sister newly paroled, bloody and blasted...
"Come here Rudolph, Bring Donner, Bring Blitzin"
They walked past the afterbirth caused by Comet and Cupid
"There is a banquet back at my place and lots of 'fluid'."
Let's go for a ride. To his place in 20 mins time,
They make a stop."Hop in the back.
Gotta pick up someone from the co-op..."
We gotta stop at the pawnshop. I need a gun for that rooftop
No hope, alone in a car, Rudolph see's a star on a nearby treetop.
He walks over remembering his mom alone in a corner.
A nearby stranger tells him about faith and lots of nice stories.
He replies "Christ isn't nice, fool...
Yeah I read the bible, the Holy Scripture.
Call it a miracle it's still on the fam's mantle with holy pictures"
Back to the car he goes, thinkin that guys ideas are queer...
His Uncle appears. The reality of life makes him shed a tear...



Merry Christmas All!

P.S. Remember that life could be so much worse than not getting the latest gaming console, or the newest Nike shoes! Be happy with what yeah got!

[TreTru]

haha not bad...merry christmas and keep droppin.

[Def-init]

Uppin!

[The Gonz]

Not bad. Kinda choppy and the rhyme scheme was off in places, I'm not sure if you intended it to be like that or not though. Lol @ picturing Mrs. Clause on the rock. Wonder what kind of crazy presents kids would get if this were true.

[Def-init]

thx for the feed man.