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MesaR
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Post by MesaR »

this is my life of everthing hiphop

I'm banging the streets, And all the DJ's keep playing you're beats
I dont think the slanging will cease, Gloves on out painting my piece
I've got all types of montana, Living the life of a damn graffer
I'm so hiphop, out getting my name up with just nikes and bandana
Trains getting crushed, Always low on cash, had the thought of snatching
So i resort to rapping, Resorted to dealing, just to support a passion
I'm From Australia, The Sydney streets, you know were my face is from
Tins in my bag, looking for a place to bomb, spotted, now the chase is on
Fuck the cops, Bunch of dogs, might catch me but graffiti never stops
Hitting up walls, tagging up shops, all in the days work of a hiphop boss
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Post by - Mutual - »

pretty good dude
had a nice flow
an was a pretty good read
i liked the multies
gave the piece that sumin extra
well done
keep'em comin
an Merry Christmas dude lol
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by MesaR »

thanks for the feeed.
just a little something quick
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Post by TreTru »

yeah man merry christmas...was cool takin a lil spin
on hip hop from the taggers point of view..fresh
compared to what i hear on the radio so i liked
the concept...aight for a quikie.. keep droppin
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Post by Gutta »

i liked it it was shawt and sweet and flowed smooth

the sydney streets?? lol...
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