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Da JoKeR · Post by **Da JoKeR** » Tue Dec 23, 2008 4:23 pm

[align=center]Destroy My Complicity, Optionless Misery
Off The Top Of This Victory, Lyrically
I'm a Non-stop Pop-2-Drop In Ya City Street
& Wont Stop For Cops, Just HIT THE WEED
We Got Lots Of Masserati With Hittin Beats
Your Posse Is Incomplete, We Formed NOW
1 Glock Isn't Missin Heat, We Storm Rounds
Cops Sit 2 Watch & Exhibit Me, It's War Now
Chore Bound, Now They All Part Of The History
Chanel, I'm Not a Mammal, Not a Chance You'll
Not Get Rambled & Lit, Bud Like I Got a Handle
Not Spark, But i Got a Candle To Light The Fuse
I'm Striked, Amused By This Type Of Booze
I Think I Might Get Loose & Flip It, Bitches
Yall Ain't GET RICHES, & Mention 4 Flippin Biscuits, While
I Get Lifted & You Left In The Kitchen 2 Rinse Da Dishes [/align]

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Tue Dec 23, 2008 6:14 pm

pretty basic piece, not bad but basic, im not to talk down cuz i was crap when i started, but yeah what we're missing in the scriptures nowadays is depth, the whole heart in the writing is missing.. imo it looks like any kids type of topic and its something you should try to stay away from. you could be good if you find your type of concept or topic your mind lingers on besides smoking weed and being #1 in ya city ya dig? but whatever floats your boat fam. keep it up.

ÐÛÇ£» · Post by **ÐÛÇ£»** » Tue Dec 23, 2008 6:19 pm

the admins need to enforce the link to feed in order to drop a script rule more

but on another note...it was str8 multis was cool flowed good..dats bout it

Da JoKeR · Post by **Da JoKeR** » Wed Dec 24, 2008 1:55 pm

i appreciate the feedback. But really, i've done hundreds of original concepts & topics. this is one of the first 'street' key's i've done since i started getting good. i just wanted 2 do that kinda shit cuz i was stoned. this wasn't for constructive criticism, just opinions.

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Wed Dec 24, 2008 1:58 pm

intro started decent, fell off a bit, i think it could've been more complex, seemed like a quick key to me, but not bad overall, keep droppin

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Thu Dec 25, 2008 6:35 am

well my criticism was my opinion.. and you've done hundreds of original concepts? why dont you show us that instead of something you dont want feed on. weird

Da JoKeR · Post by **Da JoKeR** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 9:26 am

You Want Me To Show You? You Want the Links or Do You Want The Lyrics Posted In Seperate Posts? Weird? Your weird muah fucker.

i'll show you then, get smart with I.

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:48 pm

bitch dont talk shit, im just telling you my opinion and obviously thats what you wanted dumbass

see me in the battlegrounds u fuck shit

Def-init · Post by **Def-init** » Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:35 pm

Arvincible wrote:bitch dont talk shit, im just telling you my opinion and obviously thats what you wanted dumbass

see me in the battlegrounds u fuck shit

ROFLMAO
PWNED!!!!!!!!

Da JoKeR · Post by **Da JoKeR** » Sun Dec 28, 2008 9:21 am

PWNED LMAO WTF.. i posted like 10 keystyles, they should be original enough.. as for the BITCH DONT FUCK WITH ME" talk, calm down buddy, we're ONLINE NOW

Set up a battle then you punk billy bitch. & as for the guy with one loss... nvm... just tell your owner i sayd tank you

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