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Post by HKX »

good lookin on da feed everyone I'll be sure 2 leave ya'll sum feed asap stay up
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Post by Viral »

thanks for da feed....i agree wit u cee4...i had more written..but it got cut into 8....lol
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

yea definitely a bad collab for me, next 2 collabs with k.o. r 10 x's better, appreciate the feed tho
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

i liked the fact u tried gettin everyone on'a track it was kool.

Viral - i feel ur flow cudda been just a lil smoother but it wasnt bad man

G-Baby - some of ur lines seemed a littleee rushed as u were spittin like a few bars in the middle,work on that a lil

Lady X - finally a girl spittin haha,written very basic. flow needs more emotion defo,keep practicin!

HKX - i liked ur verse man but idk,i feel u cudda came harder then what u did,still nice drop from u tho son

Kurse - sick delivery dude,ur writing is gettin better as time goes on,im glad to see and hear that. ur doin good man im proud

KO - i didnt really hear anything else from u besides this n that haz diss[also cuz i havent checked around either] but ur part was smooth man i thought it fit pretty damn nice with the song

Ekoms - every song dude ur showin progress,im feelin it. wish there was more i cud say for ur part,but just keep it comin man!
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Post by LadySam »

Im proud to see a girl on this!
Hahaha good work lady.
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Post by drunken jesus »

i agree with mosta what millz said, g baby came off the best on this then KO, ekoms probably had the worst verse cause his flow was off, kurse & hkx's verse were pretty solid, viral verse was aight but the way he delivered his lines annoyed me didn't mesh with the track, lady x's verse was aight

imo g baby and KO meshed with the track well the rest didn't as much in one way or another
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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