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Post by Quix »

becoming a lil more active in the scipture forum....holla!








Rush ma clique
and ya FANZ GET MURKED AND PLAN FOR HEARSTS!
cuz ma shotyy Reshape your stomach like SPANDEX SHIRTZ
ya''ll know thugz, well WE KNOW WORSE PLEASE DON''T CURSE
just FLEA YO TURF! cuz we''ll have ''shellz on ya chest'' like NEMO-SHIRTZ
ya bitch, I''ll LEAVE HER SPRAYED watch her TEETH DECAY!
and ''Roll around da hood'' like METER MAIDZ
I Know G''s, YOU SEE TRADERZ for a FEW LIL FAVORZ
try and Find ya sound cuz ya ''Lines ran Down'' like LOOSE LEAF PAPER
Had some of da GREATEST KIDZ SERVED and RELATE WID CLIPZ; SURE!
and quick tp put ''Metal to your waiste'' like a WAITRESS TIP-PURSE
I''ma Chef, easily have da BEEF SEVRED, then RECIEVE LEATHER
n have you DECEASE WHEATHER or not you ''kill ya self'' like HEATH LEDGER
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This Shit Deff was Tough.. cuz ma shotyy Reshape your stomach like SPANDEX SHIRTZ

Liked That The Most Out Cha Whoooole Verse
Lmfao Just Made me Go 'Whoooo!"...
I Mean Not Many Multis.. But Punches Was There.. Try Puttin The Gun Talk Away.
Be a Little More Versatile..

Anyways It Was Coo Quix Do ya Thing Nigga
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lol... i'm around Gunz, so i talk wut i know feel Me?


but yah i feel yah home boy! Versitile is key wid rap!

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Shit I Am 2.. The Thing Is It just Aint Creative...
But When you In The Streets Battlin..It's Coo...I Mean Do You Though
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I agree, leave the gunplay for the big boys. You say you're around it, not out doing it, quit fronting. C'mon, you don't have to be from the hood to know that the real cats putting in real work arent online bragging about the shit, they're serving 25 to life and don't have internet access. You've got a better chance of getting killed by a drunk driver than a cat from the hood.

Anyways, decent verse with some punches you could have used in a battle. Keep elevatin.
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hmmm ^ well i meant Around/part of my everyday life. And yah know what? i'm not out tah shoot catz for no FUCKIN reason. But for you tah say leave dah Gunplay for the BIG BOYS?? are you saying that you are a big boy? or wut? and yeah 25 to lifers?? LOLOLOL your fuckin kidding me right kiddo....You wouldn't know anything about 25 tah Life. Have you even done anytime your self? prolly not, so i wouldnt be so quick to assume you know wut otha nigguhz iz up to...feel me? So fall back before your Called Whack son! lmfao!


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Yo Rukas, Get Off His Dick. i'm Tierd Of Everybody Actin Like illest Has The Same Life. if You're Not Around Guns, Then That's Good For u Rukas. u Dont Know What's Going On in Quix Life. Anybody Can Shoot Someone, So Shut The Fuck Up With That Shit.

it's Cool if u Dont Wanna Read Gun Talk Or Dont Think He Should Write About it. But For You To Tell Him That He Doesnt Shoot Them, Or Hasn't Had Them in His Life, is Stupid Shit.

i Know There's Wiggers Who Sign On And Rap About Them. But You Gotta Live With it, And Nah i Aint Callin Him a Wigger Or Fake. i Just Aint Gonna Tell Him About His Life When i Never Seen His Life Or Been Around it.
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Plus u Dont Gotta Not Have Internet, To Use a Gun. Gang Members, Or People Who Has Shot People Can Be On The internet. And i'd Put My Life On it, That There's Some On Rap Forums. Plus u Actin Like Quix is Signed On 24/7. Dude Barely Gets On So Stop Talking Shit. i Aint Defending Quix Or Riding Him, i'm Just Tierd Of Seeing This Lil Phrase.
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Anyways This is A Nice Drop ..Betta Then Ya Last One. Not in The Mood For Feeding Today Either, But That Meter Maids Line Was Nice, So Was That Nemo Line.
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No, faggot, I think YOU need to get off dude's dick. He's a grown ass man, he doesn't need your ass to speak for him. This didn't have shit to do with you so fall back. And Quix, seriously dude, I know a hell of a lot more about killing people than anyone on this fucking site. Quote me on that. I've put in my trigger time in Iraq and I guarantee Iraq is harder than any hood in America. You don't know me, I don't know you. You may have guns and shit around you, whatever, that's life. What I'm saying is gunplay shit is played out BECAUSE of all these wack fuckers talking about it when they aren't really doing it. Sure, there MIGHT be a cat on here who's capped someone, but I guarantee they aren't on here bragging and rapping about it. Trust me on this, there's no glory in killing a man. It isn't cool. I'm saying don't add to the bullshit by talking about capping dudes when your posting on a fucking rap forum. Yeah, I don't know nothing about 25 to life because I'm not stupid enough to kill someone over trivial shit like money, drugs, bitches, I kill for YOUR freedom. You hood bitches are ignorant as hell and that's why you'll stay in the hood. Anyways, don't worry about what the fuck I've been through. Y'all just need to quit fronting like your gangsters and use some real creativity instead of being a bunch of bandwagon riders. Y'all talk about how bad the hood is and how it needs to change but then you turn around and glorify being a thug and a gangster and talk about how cool it is to rob and steal and kill. Fucking plagues of society.
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Post by EvilJoey »

Yea...

Im going to agree with Ruck here...

Dont get me wrong ill talk about guns once in a while.. but not like im a thug and if anything im being funny with it.

SO what rucks saying dose make scence...
I blame 50 cent.... Hes who spawned all these E-Thugs

Im sure theres some hard cats in this place that have had fucked up lives.. but i know there isnt as many people Shooting people as they claim it.
But then again.... This is America.. Shit we all have guns
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^Right. I'm not trying to beef or nothing, I just don't appreciate dick riders jumping into shit that has nothing to do with them. I too use some gun references but I'm not out here trying to pose as a gangster and glorify killing dudes. This verse was good, I was just saying that the gun shit is played but its a part of the culture unfortunately. Think about it, the dude that brags about doing work is the dude that gets caught. Look at all these cats in the game getting called out for being fakes. Shit, didn't Rick Ross just get called out for being a fuckin corrections officer but he's talking bout knowing Noriega and all these big time drug pushers? C'mon, we're supposed to be keeping it real, spreading messages to the people not fabricating a bunch of bullshit because it sounds cool. I could care less what some white kid from the burbs thinks of me, since thats what the majority of rap listeners are. As for the big boys comment, I'm not saying I'm a big boy. It was a poor choice of words on my behalf. What I meant to say is leave the gunplay to the dumbasses who place no value on life. They're all tough when they pull the trigger but then cry like bitches when they get shoved in the back of the squad car.
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Rukas, u Dont Needa Be Ass Hurt Over a Comment. I'm Not From The Burbs, Or White, So u Dont Needa Share You're Life, And Twist it On Me. If He Can't Rap About Guns, u Don't Need To Either. Don't Type To Me in Paragraphs, With u Crying ur Lil Speech. i Doubt Anyone Will Read it Or Cares About it. You're a Newb To The Site, Dont Act Like One You're Whole Time Here.
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It's Obvious You're Not Around Guns So u Shouldnt Even Be Sharing This With Us. There's People On Here Who Claim To Shoot Guns, Do Or Not, They Would Tell u Also Just Because u Shoot SOmeone Doesnt Mean ur Gonna get Caught. u Gotta Clean it, And Play it Smart u Fag.
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damm whats with the beefin everywhere u go miilz
people jus seem to get at u
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