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Post by eMCee Havic »

"man i cant take it any more"


"its like"

"theres nothing for me"




down on sorrow downed a bottle
and still managed to feel hollow
dreading tomarrow
cause today wasnt shit same work shift
still feeling up my drained pockets
just the same old shit
its like i'm stuck perpetully fucked
walking in sludge damn this sucks
but i'm still keeping my head up
government tasks keep wooping my ass
straying the facts
taking my money in cold hard cash
man i wish i could fade n turn the page
but enraged i convey words to pretray
how my life is every day



:Chorus: x2 (women sings)

Sometime i get down
will there be better days
cause it feels like im fading away
sometimes i cant look up
my minds confused
sick of being abused
so i dream for them better days



Doubt is a demon lying n decieving
i try an keep the reason
what am i acheiving just dreaming
shit, thought i sleeping
losing more n more self wishing 4 wealth
but only lint can be felt
the cards are delt damn time just melts
as is i stare out the window
drowning my sadiness with indo
seems only instrumentals
can get my mental aligned with my pencils
its sad aint it life is so complicated
daily life invaded by your monly payments
i fucking hate it

its like some times...

:Chorus: x2 (women sings)

Sometime i get down
will there be better days
cause it feels like im fading away
sometimes i cant look up
my minds confused
sick of being abused
so i dream for them better days

(womans song verse)

i got to get out this hole
an emptied soul needs solid goals
cause i can do more
if i dont try then i will never kno
i wont give up
i know theres mo--re


:Chorus: x2 (women sings)

Sometime i get down
will there be better days
cause it feels like im fading away
sometimes i cant look up
my minds confused
sick of being abused
so i dream for them better days
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Post by - Mutual - »

man this shit was alrite
not sumin too special
the lyrics were pretty standard nottun
this dont deserve i think that much praise
um maybe this is more a audio track
cus writtens are alot harder to impress people
u have to put alot more into an audio
but on overall lyricism scriptures have it except for dynamiq
that guy rippin it anywhere
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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