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Obsured Vocabulary

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Was bored, so thgought i would drop a key!







Listen these Vetz in Trouble B, look your text is Stumbleing
Instead of Bubbleing, I'm dope, cuz i 'Stick out on this site' like a Set of Double D's
you cowardz Attempting to Seem like you Avenging mah Team,
i'm Defending mah Green cuz i 'distribute more coke' than even Vending machines
i'm Relentless wid Keyz; Offensive indeed; your 'dumber' than dah girls on dah Simple Life
I can leave you a Crippled Bi; I'm rich, plus i 'Stack more chips' then the Pringle Guyz
I'm Tha Don, I ain't tell a Single lie; i'm just Preaching wid Text
and Receiving from Betz! and dah only '(Cor)vets you see' are Treating your Petz
you a Cheat in Rap like you Stole dah answers! Mah Crib huge and its Full of dancers
but most of all you just a 'pain in the ass' like Colon Cancer
I'm Levels above, You lil Lames Will Sink; Straight FALL OFF the same as Ink
I'm Derranged so think, I'll have you 'Cats Cradled' like FuKiN Games with string
at dah Range we Drink, Get Liquered up Quix dah Shit, straight Sicker Bruh
you can Refute mah Drops, but can't 'Consume mah shots' like your Livers Fucked
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Post by Miilz »

Good Read Not Gonna Leave Feed Because im Not in The Mood.
But This Was A Nice Drop From u ..i Like That "Pain in The Ass" Line
And Some Of ya Others..Anyways Keep Postin Drops Youre One Of The Few i Like
Reading.
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word thanks ^
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1st and last bump for feed.....No one feeding in the scripture forums huh??
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i liked it
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it was a good read
i liked the flow
yeah the punches were pretty good
for a keystyle sorta thing this was pretty good anyhow
keep'em comin
i can see alot of great stuff comin dood
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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