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TreTru vs Fans aka DR Kevorkian (Kevorkian)

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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

He isn't winning cuz i didn't edit my verse
I edited my expos lol
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Post by F.A.M.E. »

Personals - None (Feel like nobody came corrent w/ it.
Punches - Kev (Tre barely even had any, can't win a battle like that fam)
Multis - Kev
Flow - Kev
WordPlay/Nameplay - Kev

Vote= Kev

Tre barely had any punchlines, I feel both MCs could've dropped harder shit, but Kev ain't really need to drop to his usual standards to win this battle. Tre, just work on your punchlines B, your verse consisted of 90% filler. Stick around though, you'll elevate nicely.
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Post by TreTru »

.. R.A.I .. wrote:Tre thats a weak way to win .
I feel you on that I'm over it..I aint gonna cry bout it jut killem next time das all.
thanks..mayne


Tre barely had any punchlines, I feel both MCs could've dropped harder shit, but Kev ain't really need to drop to his usual standards to win this battle. Tre, just work on your punchlines B, your verse consisted of 90% filler. Stick around though, you'll elevate nicely

^^^^^^thanks, I aint gonna go nowhere.. ;) ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^



OK 1 to 3 i'm trailin..
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Post by EvilJoey »

I Lyrically Supply The Best Answers,I'll Drop This Novice,Flames Firin With Mean,Line Stanzas...
Honestly I Don't Feel He Has The Room To Land Any Cat ..Like Claustrophobic Plane Pilots In Feline Transfers...
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they call you FAN but Im aBOUT to blow OUT your BRAINS,MIS-TER KEV-OR-KI-AN "fisted" by my verbal GRE-NADE,
this kid is SO-WHACK spittin out all his his SLOW-CRAP I'm ROAD runner of RAPS, you plugged to a PHONE-JACK
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Lo Jack was better punch than ur 1st bar..

1 to Tre

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I'm Clever,Thirsty With Five Holsters, You Think You Fly Poser? You Better Scurry Or Die Soldier,
I'm Smart & Switch It Up In My Verse,U Wouldn't Witness Extreme Diversity In Tret/Traits Even If He Was Hereditarily Bipolar

So u spent one line to tell him to Scurry and that hes a poser?

then a mile of text to come back to the rhyme with Bi-poalr?
U can read Why am i breakin this down? lol
3 quick rhymes and one Drawn out line killed the flow too.

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tres was
Got these POS-TERS thats CLO-SER to YA all kissin YOUR-CRACK ,meanings lost in your RHYMES to FINDem I'd need LO-JACK
Get your DOME-CRACKED i'll pull out ya head and SPI-NAL-CAS-IN(casing)
no ESCAP-IN your NEXT for DEATH like FI-NAL-DES-TIN-A-TION

Lo- Jack line was better than than Kevos 2nd bar
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Either I Peel The Open Gun..Or The Other Option Is I Won't Stop Til You Sane, Chilled Or Chokin Son!,
In A Fist Fight Its Nuffin...If You Want To Beat Me With A Palm You Better Gain Skills With Pokemon!

Really? u like 7 years old? and if ur Brave enough to use somthign liek poekmon in a battle. it needs to be hot... Not u talkin about some pokemon no one has ever heard of..

And u never actuly said anything that Rhymed with Pokemon!!!!!!!!
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DEF-I-CATIN on your weak RHYMES your WAS-TIN my TIME
they call you ~FANS?~......MAN your flos aint as cool as MINE

Not the best punch but ok on the name and miles better than the pokemon shit. ______________________________________________________________________________
Talk Shit And I'll Make Sure Ya Whole Town Is Extorted!,Special Forces Guarantee This Clown Is Reported
I Hit People In Throats for Speakin B/s..Ya Should Know Aynbody Who Talkin To Fans End Up Sounded Distorted

the Fan line is good... but the other line sounds Rhymes for the sake of rhyming... No purpose... Special forces Report people? What?

I'm Sick Of The Guy Should I Give The Fraud Finishers? Or Should I Mold Him Into A Fan And Make Him A Broad Listener
In My Battle Vs Quix I "Displayed The Bitches Emotions" I Guess You Could Call Me The Dog Whisperer

Dog whisperer line it lame ...
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your a TOOL-OF-MINE i'll USE-YA before I trash you LOS-ER
you a HIGH-SCHOOL-ER my COLD-FLOS will pop your MED-ULLA (medulla oblongata)

i'll ChEW-YA like a barraCU-DA when my MICS-ON...have you pissin your pants
soon as you see my I-CON

even tho Kevos fan line beats the Medulla line... i thin the Icon punch was better than the Dog whisperer
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So again After wasting time to break it down... Vote Gos Tre.

Personals ehh No one really had em
Punches TRE 90%
Multis Ehhh none that mattered enough to score
Flow Tre
& WordPlay/Nameplay atleast.. i think tre go tit but even if i went 50/50

Tre still WINS
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Post by Omega Bill »

Whoever is the next to post out of Duc3 or Tre with anything in their message besides saying how the voting stands automatically loses the battle and it'll be closed.

Quit swaying, both of you.
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

What The Fuck Dude..Joey's Verse is Obviously Bull SHit
I Don't give a fuck if u give me a loss

Either I Peel The Open Gun..Or The Other Option Is I Won't Stop Til You Sane, Chilled Or Chokin Son!,
In A Fist Fight Its Nuffin...If You Want To Beat Me With A Palm You Better Gain Skills With Pokemon!

he said that Sane,Chilled Or Chokin Son
Gain Skills With Pokemon

THE SAME FUCKING SYLLABLES COUNT
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Post by KcKal »

Yo Tre, stop actin like you da shit dawg. That verse was nothin,your nothin, i say that cause u cant even stand down and lose like a man. Get da fuck outta here. Ppl like you piss me off,you like a child and shit.
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Post by TreTru »

thats 2-3 I'm trailin..
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Post by Arvincible »

poor battle...both need a lot of help, duc3 came correct with deliveries but the punches, multis and wordplays were pretty lame

and tre obviously understands the concepts of the cats but just didnt come with much fire power.

if i were a mod i wouldve given duc3 a loss for swaying and editting the verse without consent, i believe he came first at attacking a voter that voted against him. tre can only defend himself after duc3's comment.

but otherwise this would be a catsweep for duc3.
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Post by NENO »

Like what's up with all the stretched ass lines & punches. Where are all the personals & nameplay? All I say are unnecessary multis just so it sounds good. This is suppose to be a battle?
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Post by Jesodist »

Punches - Both of them but after readingthe verse twice Kev got it
Multis - no doubt TreTru
Personals - both had some there but Kev was stronger
Flow -Both have different styles i liked TreTru
WordPlay/Nameplay - i saw this one as a tie





Voted Kev
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Post by Miilz »

Personals - Kev
Punches - Kev
Multis - Tre
Flow - Tre
WordPlay - Kev
Nameplay - Kev

Vote is For Kev.
This Wasn't a Close Battle.
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Post by Jesodist »

5 votes Kev won the battle someone lock this shit.
THIS SITE IS AN EMBARASSMENT
FULL OF SNITCHES AND BITCHES WHO DICK RIDE IN BUNCHES.
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Post by TreTru »

Ay everybody thanks alot for voting..even if you voted for kev...I really appreciate the feed..who's next haha..
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Post by The Gonz »

I agree with NENO. This shit didn't even look like a battle, it was more like a rhyme-off. Hardly any punches, no plays, no metas, both verses are mediocre at best. There's hotter shit in the cypher section than this, and they don't take hours and days to write em.
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