CEE4 IS D.O.P.E

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Tue Dec 16, 2008 4:08 am

Cee4 Is....

Doctor Ominous, Patients Eradicated
Dastardly Outlaw, Patience Evaporated
Defying Oppression, Penetrating Enemies
Delivering Orgasms, Percolating Entities
Demonically Organising, Perverted Executions
Demanding Order, Perfected Evolution
Dynamically Offered, Presented Elocution
Devolution? Owns Power Exclusively
Deviouslly Obtaining Powder Elusively
Developing Odyssey, Peers Empathise
Despite Onerousness, Pee`s Enterprise
Daily Outshining, Past Expectations
Deliberately Outlining Passed Elevations
Deadliness Occurs, Paying Excessively
Disciples Obviously Praising Expectantly
Detailed Overview? Put Excellence
Devil Orchestrated, Pure Elegance
Deliberately Ostracized, Partitions Endured
Dopest Overall, Positions Ensured

The Gonz · Post by **The Gonz** » Tue Dec 16, 2008 4:11 am

Not shabby. I don't like schemes like this cuz it makes you force shit and use words you would probably never use on a regular run of the mill track. Its still good, quality lyricism, I just think it seems forced since you had this mental limitation of conformity.

Lotus · Post by **Lotus** » Tue Dec 16, 2008 5:12 am

Disagree wit ruckus on that.

quite creative. it's always good to stretch your lyricism... how to make your point within the given boundaries. while expanding your talent.

but this shit IS dope.

how long it took you to do this?

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Tue Dec 16, 2008 12:06 pm

Very creative, would've been hard to write . but u pulled it off well .
Damn . U cant really say anything bad coz most dudes would do a worse job then you on this typa thang .

Mad props tho Cee .. This is pretty crazy.

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Tue Dec 16, 2008 1:31 pm

thanks for the feed. and lotus it didnt take that long. i started it yesterday but got bored. wasnt planning on finishing it but i had fuck all else to do today. probably about an hour overall by the time i played about with it. i nearly spent just long editing my typos n shit after i posted it lol

Gorilla Mist · Post by **Gorilla Mist** » Tue Dec 16, 2008 1:35 pm

Nice Vocab and Structure.

Nice Complex..

9.8/10
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/bin-l ... 11539.html

Rate back fams.

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Tue Dec 16, 2008 2:59 pm

This Was Written Out Well For What it Was
A Few Lines Were Just Forced In My Opinion,
The Creativity Was There , I Mean It Was Pretty Cool
I Wrote One with 2 Letters a While Ago.. & Did My Own Alphabetical Slaughter
Type Piece.... I Liked The Vocab Used To Match your Lines, some Good Vocab used here And There...
Hmmm...

Felt Like The Last Bar, Didn't Keep up With The Rest of your Verse lol.

Anyways Good read
Keep Droppin

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Tue Dec 16, 2008 11:20 pm

thanks for the feed. and hazard i tried to make the last line a bit simpler in case people didnt get the rest of the verse.

ÐÛÇ£» · Post by **ÐÛÇ£»** » Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:26 am

LMAO @ you on that papoose alphabetical slaughter tip

ROFL!

Shit was dope.. but i just laugh when i hear papoose's verse saying that

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:36 am

yeah this was great
incredibly creative and unique
keep shit like this comin
i loved it the vocab was steamin
keep'em comin a classic could easily come out of u

TreTru · Post by **TreTru** » Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:38 pm

dog that shyt mustv'e been crazy hard..prety complex
sick...drop mos def...to sum it all in one word D.O.P.E.

CEE4 IS D.O.P.E

CEE4 IS D.O.P.E

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