Tight as suk man, had my earphones in and was doing other shit and i was nodding my head not even knowing what was playing. Sounded like some professional ish. Great quality, great delivery. Beat / sample was cool too.

You free to hop on a few beats??

Perfect, thanks for the time and effort man.

Good tips on where to cut, plus i just started looking for a bit with no beat, so good to know im going in the right direction lol. will also look into the high pass filter.

Thanks again.

Agree with Jesus about the melody, but it wouldnt take alot of work to make this a great beat. Liked the drums, had alot going on but it worked well together. The more you listen the catchier it gets. Could see someone working a nice verse over that. nice. -- 12 Jul 2010 12:48 -- Agree with Jesus ...

Lol, okay, i'll rework it. Must just be cause i made it lol, but i like the way it sounds. I usually try and make dance / trance music, so this was part of my first few attempts to make a rap /hip hop beat. What software do you use to make your beats HJ? Any tips on how to change whats wrong etc ...

Shout man, thanks for the feed. Thats what i've been getting alot of lol, need to mix up the sample abit. Also, people think the sample melody for the verse part has a bit of clashing with my pattern so sounds a bit busy. trying to work on that too lol.

thanks again.

Cee4 - First bar is tight as suk, 2nd line is flawlessly worded with a great punch. First bar set up was a little 'ehh' cause the 'dirt nap' part didnt make much sense to me, but punch was a hit. Second bar is funny too, good play, not as hard hitting but still connected. 3rd bar is okay, a little ...

lol, just been chillin' lol. Haven't been into the whole battle scene for a while, so stopped frequenting a few sites. But im trying to get into a bit of production so back lookin' for feedback / collabs etc.

Whats good? From the looks of it you've elevated a ton

Yeah, listened to a few of the tracks, and quality, beats and lyrics are all on point.

Quality stuff.

Hey all, Any rappers who want to practice / Have time / like the beat, who want to drop on it, can do just that, and it would be appreciated lol. http://soundcloud.com/theadonis/one-more-night-with-you Sampled Mariah Carey's - My all. Criticism/feedback on it welcome. Only my second rap beat ever ...

Hows everything going?... Aint been around in a while..

this is photoshopped apparently..

work smarter, not harder.... the earlier the better...

had some shiz, breaded chicken, broccoli, spring beans and potatos... not great lol..

^? stretched out to a decision victory over a dodgy out of contention fighter and beat a 45 year old, past his prime champ, who he had about 50 pounds on. im a brock fan, but he hasn't been that impressive in any of his fights, its HIM thats impressive, but as far as performances and records go, he ...

hard one to call, mir won the first fight with an awesome kneebar, but brock was pretty much winning the fight up until that point. mir has returned back to his phenomenal ways after the motorcycle accident, which no one could have predicted, he looked like an amateur compared to the old him, and ...