startin soft, i think not words are dropped like a contract durin a scandal
what you think shows in the lines creasin your face readin me's hard to handle
going mentalist, i'm no Simon Baker but i know the truth when i see it
the smallest details are your downfall, now call mom like this is meant to ...

definitely on a horrorcore vibe here.
shit's twisted, which is what I like every now and then.
killer flow, creative, even if some concepts were ones i've heard and seen before.

this seemed more like a hip hop poetry piece. which is what i dig. well thought out.

(Paraphrased from Micah 7: 8-10)

Never again will you gloat over me

Like some worthless trophy

I've fallen to your fists and sneering jabs for shallow glory

Watch out, for i will rise and change the story

The darkness may rule about me

The darkness will be no more with the Lord as my light

I ...

i'm a quick reader and as i read there were some surprises but, this seemed blase. decent to say the least.

i liked this, it's classic style, but i dug what you were conveying. good job.

wow this has been up a while...

Punches-Kause
Flow-32
Mulities-32
Personals-tie
Enjoyment-32
Rhymescheme- tie

vote: 32

punches are what make a battle, but you can come with daggers and still not break the skin. that's why 32 got my vote.

imo, Wiz's vote shouldn't count because it's not thoroughly explained.

Punchlines: Buer
Nameplay: Tie
Flow: Tie..
Rhymescheme: Buer
Personals: Tie

vote: Buer

expo: Buer,took this in my opinion. loved his complexity and scheme. King, shorten the lines and try not to get too fancy i could tell ...

Obie Trice

lol, thanks.

AZ

Braille

Riches slow comfort

could use spellcheck, but then that's me.
umm, this was interesting to say the least.
some of the language and grammar made some parts seem redundant. but this decent overall.

:clears throat:

droppin in i'm calmin 'em with gas
knockin 'em out with verbs and class
old school I know, but when it comes
i rip simple as God did them kingdoms
a DMX/tech N9ne hybrib dealin with demons
workin on devotions has me doing readin's
cause the sea man has me quakin 'n the deck squeakin ...