Word, so its my boy Rill Ill on first verse, me on the second. rill Ill also on the beat. Hope you guys like it! Please leave a link for comment if you want one. Thanks for listening.

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Beat is nice, but needs better mixin. Your lyrics are solid, but I think you should try addin more multis man. Makes your verse more interesting and shows skills. Like I said, lyrically nice tho. Chorus was alright... aint really feel it to be honest man.
Overall, nice track tho! Keep up the good ...

Sick beat man! Your flow and delivery is nice - you remind me alot of Machine Gubn Kelly (who is blowin up right now might I add lol). It was a little difficult for me to understand the first verse's lyrics, but tight otherwise. Second verse definitely dope.
Nice hook too bruh. Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the feedback yall. Ill be sure to work on that energy! Hell, I might even redo this one down the road. Lol.

Thanks for the feedback bro. i can respect that opinion. If you got somethin you need reviewed, just post the link.

I can tell youre nice wit it, but Im not feelin this one that much bro. I mean nice punchlines, I just thought it could use a little more substance.Keep it up tho bro.

Nice bruh! Im really feelin the beat, Im not sure if thats an original?... Anyways the flow is nice, great delivery, and solid lyrics. Nice mixin too - you must use garage band or somethin. Lol. Keep up the good work man!

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Just lookin to make this shit as dope as I can. I've been writin forever, but this is the first solo track I've recorded. If you ...

Thanks for the welcome. I heard about you guys from google, I was just looking for somewhere to post my music and get some feedback, and you guys seemed like the place to go.

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