Alright 4-1 good battle bro

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alright 3-1 uppin for votes

yea cool whenever jus set it up

alright cool i set it up, 5 bars cool?

alright 2-0

lookin to battle u up???

alright latern i'll set it up 2day

Cool cool nice rhymes dude. Alright uppin 4 votes every1!

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my first time on this site and already found my first victim/
i bet M33Kish gets excited when male officers search strip em/
you shoulda never took this challenge cuz ur 1-2 record soon to be 1 & 3/
i spit like a real rapper while u pretending like a wanna-b/
M33Kish ur rhymes "Wack" like when ...

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6 bars (12 lines)
due 48 hrs of check
no crew votes/ etc..etc..
this is my check

alright cool. i'll set it up on the battle thread and drop mine now.

6 Bars (12 lines)
house rules.
no crew votes/haters...etc etc...
when accepted due within 48hrs of check.

WHOS UP!?

catchy i like! put this on track and it will prolly sound better than reading. lol its good

yeah the flow duz let u visualize. umm i dig the samurai concept tho. jus keep writin bro.

first girl i seen droppin on her. well u got some flow but could work on the rhyme scheme alittle more. it started off good but starting at "Yes im yung; and yes im still in school." u started getting a little simple. jus keep workin on ur skill and u'll improve. keep it up girl.