Aesop Rock-One of Four

The flow seemed on point throughout the verse. Only thing I thought could have been better (like everyone above me) is the ending to the verse seemed to falter..

Solid drop though.

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah I still need to work on my flow.. And hopefully I'll start doing a little audio to practice once I find a mic.

Livin in the past brings nothing but pain.
Remember all the memories and relive the shame.
Left me clinically insane, No where to escape.
Seemed like society had sealed my fate.
To live on filled with hate. Bitter at the world for my bad hand.
Filled with self-pity no one last stand.
To get my life ...

Thats for the feed. and yeah I really need to start working on my flow and using more internal rhymes and multies. Just tryna get the content part up first

Sittin in the waiting room nervous as hell.
Scared to see what the picture will tell.
For the only person that I've truly cared.
About the way you live and how you fared.
From the day I left to the present date.
I hope you don't feel any feelings of hate.
For the way I've treated you in the later ...

Ey whats up.

I'm pretty new to writing lyrics, and was looking for a place to post my lyrics and get feedback. I reside in VA.