Rhyme Asylum hands down

Copywrite vs. Thesaurus

This was ill from top to bottom and it goes in raw with the beat duke. Perfect multis and wording in this piece. I hope you record this one.

Thanx for the feed and you got exactly what I was aiming for. It's not hard and it's not whack, it's just right for the beat I was writing it to as opposed to my other drops on here.

My other drop "No Evil Compared" is a harder-hitting flex-type song cause the beat I was writing to was dark. This ...

^^^Because I'm too lazy to do simple s*** like that lol but yea, I'll send it to you.

-- Tue Dec 14, 2010 5:15 pm --

Yeah that shit is fun, I got shit like "the the E.N.D. in friend - or - The R.E.M. in dream (rapid eye movement). This was pretty sick, had decent multi's and flow, I have a rug ...

Thanx man, I'm glad you liked this piece. That line you quote is in my Top 10 best lines I've written. It's nice when you can write something that you haven't heard of before. It's one of the lines I've written where I can say the wordplay is original.

I can't put it on audio until I figure out how ...

^^^You are blowing this thread kid

apparently oxygen aint doin it.. so crooks intend to cook instead
hemoglobin? call this dope emcee the dopamine, without me you would need meds
throw aside your principles, its simple bro, i got the power to turn shit to gold
whether its cocaine or gettin into a ...

A little sumthin I did as a collab with a friend of mine's

Thomahawk
Gen (Me)

I summon the undertaker .....thats come to scrape up mother nature/
so push the buttons on the elevator/
she had her fuckin wrists slit thick wit devils razor/
so push the number 666 as hell awaits ya/
Im kinda ...

Off with his head!!!

This was pretty good. You started off strong and faded a little bit after the middle. Some lines didn't hit but you had some dope ones in there:

Sequence the life saver of hip hop equipped with that paramedic skill
i got the best lines while you guys show off nothing like an anorexic build
never ...

This was a nice drop...when I started it off...I caught a slight Jay Z vintage flow...Where I'm From type of intro..which was cool considering the beat and so on...the use of multis were placed nicely..ur switch ups did seem strange but I think it might be one of those better heard then seen type ...

Yea def, sounds like a masterpiece in the making. Just give me the word.

Thanx for the feedback you two, I appreciate your thoughts.

This verse is a tad bit moderate in comparison with my other drops in this forum. I kept the punches moderate to go with the mood of the instrumental better....otherwise I would have worded them differently and set them up more thoroughly.

Thanx for the feedback tho.

^^^Bleh, continuing from AMH

Like tatoos to the head?, stand back when I start abusing this thread...
leaving it hotter than the the ones on the sheets in Lucifer's bed...
Gen the God provided HEME to the GLOBE AND/GLOBIN...
I'm the reason ya blood changes from blue into red, so without me you ...

First verse to a song I'm writing.

Beat- Jay-z: There's Been a Murder
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A9ENNHwkiWI

Peep the random thoughts from a damaged heart, awkward inside…
I don’t want all of the pie all at one time, I demand it in parts…
I’m from a place where amateurs talk, and cameras spark ...