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I was more of a read than anything
I personally think the lines were a little long
unless you do that slow talk swag style that Jz does
but I didnt feel any swag in the drop, so it was more of a read
I think u need to add mulit's in ur drop to make the flow
stronger as it lacked in something called ...

yours was the best verse I didnt really like the second guy and 3rd guy didnt do much
the chorus was gay as hell man I dont get what that was about cha...

anyway props on ur verse

~MarkB~

Your weak rhymes just dont cut it
scrapping off your whackness is the only time you 'rugged

I was thinking doing the 2 links thing on this site
So that way people have to give 2 pieces of feed back
before they can post up anything, because we are getting
peoples drops slept'd on and it's not nice for individuals
not that I have had that problem, because 1 I am new and
haven't dropped ...

Dont joke around, be serious dude
I'm laughing at your lines like comedians do

You lack passion on the mic like you verbally Lack In Style
Reason you claim to take it 'Tight' Is ..... Just like a Paedophile

I didnt actually make this a whole track
It was only a sample just to see what outcome I'd produce

Thanks for the feed back, glad you liked it

sorry working link now

Let me know what u think, it's a year old now
but I'll release something newer at a later date

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welcome to the site enjoy ur stay

I stay rappin while wrapped in these canisters
hand to hand combat stay fracturing amateurs
punch line damage ya - word play massacre
It's picture perfect have this bitch flash like a camera

It's ok, but I found that the flow doesn't really ride through out I think you need to take less breaks
use multis because It came across very basic, but at least it was in time with the beat
I'm not saying it's bad but not saying it's great either, I think your voice is decent but u need to deliver ...

Who did the hook?
I don't really like this type of music thou
Not saying this is bad but I save the romance for the bedroom
SxS ur verse was ok, I don't think I liked Slik's
was that him singing in the second verse? if so he should stick to it

props though, just found this a mellow track Im just ...

I just listened to this I liked it dope track, loved the beat like everyone else
You must be a Mexicano777 fan if u mexican lol


~Markb~