Now I'm pissed

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I accept

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Checking in and may the best man win. PS thanks for the challenge

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Thanks for the rush dumb fuck let's hurry this up, you sarah paylon mother fucker, from the start you were done/
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Very good imagery the foot prints with 2 left feetfor sure best line. With heaven and hell raps or poems its a hit or a miss. I'd say that was a bunt.
Im Living In Mines Thank GOD Im A PAGAN... that's a funny ass oxymoron.

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Good stuff as always you really bring emotion to your poems and can describe the shit out of simple things.

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That shit is funny simple but great thanks for the laugh and bringing comedy to the site.

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I see where you were going but very redundent. Ocean love blah you repeated the same thing slightly worded different you should really write and research ocean love and metaphores. Keep it up.

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It was pretty good. I liked some of the rhymes but like mainstream music it lacked depth and creativity. I'd like to see something not off the top from ya pretty good for what it is the tools or there but I imagine you could do better.

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Looking for a battle of any kind

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I went from Emphasis to Eminent, I enter this with excellence, its effortless exercising elements, mistakes were made on my entering dear, let's make it perfectly clear, lend me an intimate ear, don't mistake me for "Imminent" cause I'm already here.

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