4-5 bars set it up

thnx man....

i doubt i'll put it to a beat....and i think it flows idk...haha didn't realli check i dont write to beats...

-- Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:46 am --

no more feed?

thnx man uppin

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/horocore-freestyle-vt15871.html


This feeling does anything but soothe and the mood stalks
Loneliness incurable by movies and group talks
For solutions I’m a blank board. Nothing to do with the new chalk
Life’s a dance battle and my only move is the moonwalk

My ...

still uppin this...

haha thnx for the welcome yall

lovin the vocab in this drop. and it flowed pretty well throughout. multis and inners present.......and idk why but i enjoyed this...tho the topic is tackled ALOT

this is a fun read....there was quality in here but it felt keyed......as it was lol...i'd like to see a well thought out horrorcoreverse from u cuz seem good at it. there's something beautiful about murdering someone with rhymes schemes and word play...
pretty simple but not very predictable so ...

lol thnx for the feed yall

lol...cool how each person likes a different part....if yall leave links i'll rtf

thnx uppin this:D

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/lyrical-genocide-vt15857.html#p134063

To the trends the strong become the weakest servants
Politicians creep their words in like sneaky serpents
Making us believe we’re the beneath the earth if
The persons that we really wanna be should surface

We blow roofs off ...

this is ok i guess...tbh i'm not too impressed cuz i have seen keys better than this. it started off nice with nice concepts (loved that A sexual line) then after the first few bars the quality fell off so i got bored and disappointed as it went along. overall this is decent and this generally ...

wassup it's mr.yoyo...lookin for an active site with good writer's that'll help me elevate and stuff...wassup