last bar was good, at least you ended well. wasn't feelin the rest.

yeah i'm with the consensus here, the last three lines fell off hard, beginning was excellent.

it'd be understating my case to say i'm capable,
unshakable, your flow is recycled, biodegradable
mcs are insatiable, literal gluttons for punishment
out of habit i stack rapper cadavers by the hundreds kid
my fantastic rap theatrics keep you half-wits rapt like plastic yo
answer back? may as well ...

haha nice.

good looks to three-sixty, a lyrical pixie
whose nickname's explicitly the number of dicks he's
affixed to his lips, that ain't whistlin dixie
he digs pricks, strictly
runnin in circles, spinnin his wheels
goes out on weekends in garters and heels
one more bit of proof that this dude's ...

oughta be cautious when you step in my zone, you get no quarter
this guppy tryin to swim with the sharks, not even treadin water
it's obvious you're not a rhyme pro, more of a hobbyist
you on some sorry shit, i don't even have the foggiest
notion of why you postin that faux shit in my zone bitch
i'm ...

yo i'm that upstart orator, rapstar radical
quick to put tenured emcees on forced sabbatical
some underestimate, act brash and adversarial
they're in unmarked graves after closed-casket burials
you don't frighten me in the least dude
i slaughter wack cats like you, make em into chinese food
i'm ...

what up illest.

mc earl grey in this.

used to battle on sohh before that place became a graveyard.

just started rhyming again, want to get back in practice for writing.

good to be here.