thanks tre, nah the beat and hook were sampled by sinima.

thanks for the feed man, appreciate it,

i wasn't sure bout the "singing" either... but figured i'd leave it in to try something different

updated the audio file, new verse and redone the first one

no idea mate, its a sinima beat called "stray shots"

ostee homie, you must have some thick skin,
comin in here like its a battle, you just can't win,
you got a little weakness, what i say, take it on the chin,
i'll try to help you elevate but my patience is gonna wear thin,
so i think i'm gonna diss you, strike you deep within,
if you took time to ...

updated version.

they say every story has closure... i found mine... and thats what the second verse speaks about.

now lookin for feed on this if you could people.

i know i can't sing... but i tried lol

Hy-Grade

here ya go dude,

any feed buddy?

thanks for the feed guys,

tre could you explain whatcha mean by "doin da best you can do with ya available resources.."

ok so i re-done this on monday, replaced the original track with the new one, new feed please?

yeah, fife, scotland

thanks sol, working on the second verse just now

ah cool, long way from me then lol

cheers mate, appreciate the feed

where bout?

you live in the uk?

yeah i get it now, thanks for explaining.

basically saying that you can get rid of a problem but another one comes up? something like that?