Back again, more raps, war attacks/
before tracks, I was a lame now I got whores on they backs/
the takeover, games about ta change extreme makeover/
like the ice age but my regimes way colder/
couldn't melt us if you brang the heat from the sun/
and my shit bang like im packin the heat for a gun ...

[GUA-GUA]
My life has come to a cross point/
no longer am I standing straight cause i've crossed joints/
i'm smoking life out of death stressing a point/
cause of hearing good news i've been deaf now anoint/
that living is taken for granted till your time living/
is halted to join the non-living ...

THATS MY BOYS VERSE DONT REALLY KNOW HOW TO WRITE HIS VERSE OUT GOOD SO SORRY IF YOU CANT GET THE RHYTHM

[GUA-GUA]
Motivation drives me to stay patient, during this war of the new sensation/
we are tempted fools to get aggravated, over rap's dispute and altercation/
yet the demise of this game that ...

Life, whats the meaning, survival of the fittest/
a cold hearted demon, arrival of a menace/
man, we were sent here ta past test thrown are way/
the choose of wrong before right, depends if you born that way/
broken homes, shit the most scared child makes top notch dollars/
ive seen scholars workin ...

dont like stucture how it was written at all fix it up

Its everymen for himself/
like nobody recognizes your ability your covered in stealth/
gonna make it by myself, I don't need no help man/
see messin wit me, that aint good for your health man/
till I get big its back to studio, back to the lab/
back to my room wit a pen and a pad/
so I can write ...

LEAVE FEED ON BOTH

MESSAGE
Started all back in 1987/
mothers gift second son sent from heaven/
scrawny kid but never backed down when peeps was stepping/
born wit a shield held a mic for his weapon/
put his set on the map Chi-city stay reppin/
at the age of eleven, he wrote his first poem/
not ...

Ill Hip-Hop, real Hip-Hop/
I cant let em steal Hip-Hop/
ill Hip-Hop, real Hip-Hop/
I cant let em steal Hip-Hop/

[VERSE]
Naw I didn't bite the lines I just revised the structure/
my rhymes puncture, thunder and lightening blind struck ya/
my styles the kind thatll touch ya/
leave you beggin for more ...

nice collab put it on audio

"RAISED FROM THE BOTTOM IS THE BEGINNING OF ONE OF MY OTHER RAPS THAT WHY I SAY AWITCHED THE LINES"

Raised from the bottom, pay attention I switched the lines/
play your position I switched my mind/
I wanna pump pistols and pack nines/
portray the image of legends Big and Pac when I bust mines ...

it had a nice style and the flow was consistent
i think you couldve maybe better with vocab
but ill give it 8.8/10

i see what yall sayin thats why i stop at 2 verses
thanks for the feedback

[CHORUS]
This is our city, who the victims now, (we run this)/
and cant no government system hold us down/
were you from, (Chicago), were you from, (Chicago)/
were you from, (Chicago), were you from, (Chicago)/
this is our city, bang our test and youll die/
cause it aint worth reppin if it aint ...

[VERSE 1]
Let me take you to a place, wit pain and heartaches/
before rappers acted hard and fake, start the tape/
back when I was a young individual, dumb criminal/
open ya mind peep the visual/
back when it was about speaking ya mind/
preaching a line, not teaching a crime/
we used to hit the ...