EVERYMAN FOR HIMSELF

[Concept]

Its everymen for himself/
like nobody recognizes your ability your covered in stealth/
gonna make it by myself, I don't need no help man/
see messin wit me, that aint good for your health man/
till I get big its back to studio, back to the lab/
back to my room wit a pen and a pad/
so I can write some rhymes, lines to go with the flow/
its like I bust I freestyle so hot it lit up the dro/
im fightin in a battle against all odds/
to be claimed as a God, get five mics on my debut like Nas/
have these other sucka emcees fear the air that breathe/
proceed, to give you what you need, livin in greed/
you can be, on the corner one day slangin CDs/
then the next day you're the biggest thing on TV/
it seems, everybodys dream, is to get that cream/
before they another teen, body found on the murder scene/
you betta watch yo back, im quick to react/
strapped, this is more then just combat/
this is fiction against fact, real and truth/
forget about all that bullshit you heard in the booth/
cause I aint gon stoop/
to the low level of rappin bout bitches, drugs, and coupes/
man, this is ruthless, this is how my crew spits/
and this makes fake rappers feel pain when the truth hits

[Invincible]

good job man very nice flow and consistency

[MesaR]

cool 8.2

[complexity]

Concept Was Straight.
Flow was good.
No lines that really stuck out.
It was well worth the read though.
8.5/10

[~Symbolikull~]

I agree wit complexity, it was tight witta kool concept, i liked the read..