like you blowing your nut after someone gives you some constructive criticism?

wow..

Kurse, if you wanted everyone to wank one out over your track..why didnt you just state that in the title so we could all do so accordingly, then we wouldnt have to mess with all this 'opinion' rubbish

your putting this track on here for feedback..

and someone giving you their honest ...

lol..pointless internet beef..blahhhh

thats what quix did to me..

but safe..xpliss battle phenom

thats such a coincidence..

against you!

but before that about 3 years ago..felt the urge to write again for some reason

whens the last time you woke up in the morning not remembering how you got there!?

or just not have them..

like 8th said..break the verse down, and then whichever you enjoy more..wins

categories are just an excuse for a lazy ass vote with no feedback

ive only been checking this board for a couple of weeks..

but this is the best drop ive heard..lyrics were sick, some real emotion there..production on point, sounds really proffesional, really well layed out track

I wanna give you everything I never had..
not that I wasn't given alot, but I got ...

hahaa..

Petrafyne..before you get all excited..i wasnt referring to this track..my feed on this track is the first post..i actually checked a second track Tre showed me..so check what context i say something in before you assume yeah?

Tre - thats a fair point..and there wasnt really much point ...

Flow - killah

Quix came with streettched bars
Killah most of your bars were alright but there were a couple of points where you went off flow..

although killah had less multis they were far less forced..


punches - Killah

Quix my favourite lines were

but you'll 'End up Underwood' like Blairs ...

what you saying phenom?

i mean 24 bars..

in my book ....................../....................../ = 2 bars

so does
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just clearing that up..cos ive seen some weird as fuck bar arrangements on here

who wants it?

what the fuck does smh mean..

il edit this with my vote..looking forward to reading

Seeing as duce is ducking my call

24 bars

if you plan to hi jack my thread..please refrain from the use of awful wordplay...scotty

and novel..you just carry on bro

fucking no show faggot

DROP YOUR VERSE..your almost a week over deadline!

in a text battle? come on man!!!

have a nice day