I'll render you helpless and hopeless, verbal hammers to the head make it tough to focus, ripping through your nervous system, with sound waves leaving you in fits when you listen, causing ruptures in your spinal cords, as vital nerves are sliced by demonic swords, in serpentine shapes extending ...

Mate, i'm loving the structure. Them verses are deep-its good to read them..anyways, I aint been here long but its good to see peeps write about meaningful stuff..keep it up dude. Peace

Something I wrote a very long time ago. Feedback Please. Peace.


My thoughts are created through the cosmic fusion of celestial imaginations,
Empowering me to break free from the chains of foetal positions,
As my mental dispositions evolve into elevated methods of thinking,
My words shine over ...

Yo, I'll battle you dude. Aite check the verse n reply whenever you can.


I got swagger like big L/ stab these lyrical daggers in your head to watch your brain swell/ destroy your brain cells, and rip your legs off so you can crawl back into your lame shell/
I'll send you into deep space/ I rhyme ...

My heart stays weighted, mind meditated,
Thoughts I've created left my soul levitated,
But jaded...Faded,
Pumped with caffeine but heavily sedated,
Torn by emotion, mind and body completely separated,
Deflated..Unrelated,
Two entities never associated.


Aite hope y'all enjoyed-Hit me up with some ...