definitly a ill drop. i was thinkin tha same thing wit tha american pyscho shit

look dnt take dis da wrong way. jus tryna giv u sum constructive criticism. i aint no pro at dis but all i can do is share wat i kno. overall i wasnt rly feelin dis. like wit da: rappin i handle it like a unicycle wit no balancin. i woodve ben like : dis rap shit i can handle it yall cant like i ...

i dont need mad clips cus my minds grips mad tricks/ im like the mad rapper u shatter wen i spit assaults u gets batterd/ gettin fryed wit tha rest of my cake mix i make hits that misplace lids n dislocate ya main veins bitch/ and in the same breath i may rest n comeback as tomoro n todays best ...

i think tha drop was dun up nice...im new here myself so my feed mite not b helpful but u def had good structure n flow. i agree on tht TO line it was ill. cood prolly work on ya metaphors n multis a lil more but agen im new here so i cood b wrong..anyways i liked it n keep writin n as long as u put ...

[align=center]I'm sitting, spitting, blitted in my fitted with a baseball bat,
I erase all cats with punches that even have spaceballs laugh,
Crack cats coofys in half like that age old man shaft,
So I put everyone in the game but maino up on blast,
Smash up and crash your mainframe, then shatter ...

[align=center]If you see 'em holla its the cops, its the cops. They scopin up on my block\
Po 9 is knowin im holdin glocks. Im wanted for some crimes like flowin rocks\
But im neva showin spots. they cant find my stash I copped my ass a shock box\
my chevy drop top is top notch. I got hip hop ...

ayo ruckus, that was some of the deepest shit ive ever read...mad props n mad respect. like eminem said u spilled ur heart thru tha pen rite thare. good luck in the army n stay safe if u hav ta go to the sandbox. i also gotta say i give u mad respect for writin sumtin thats real. again yo mad props ...

Punches: scott
Personals: mod
Flow: scott
Multies: scott
Wordplay: scott
Entertainment: scott

overall: SCOTT JAMES

1.Punchlines - Haz
2.Nameplay - Haz
3.Wordplay - Haz
4.Flow - Mod
5.Multis - Mod
6.Consistency - Haz
7.Enjoyment - Haz
--Overall Vote--
Haz