Hm. I'll see about this, but I need to know a topic.

I'll think about it, it's a pretty busy time for me but this could all work out really well.

Killah shooting blanks everytime he takes a crack at a guy he's faced
If the name fits rock it, cause you never 'capitalise or ace' (capital I's or A's)

I'll wreck you special kid against your sorry ass neglect is fair
Dude I've seen more threat in killahs strapped to the electric chair

How dare ...

check

The street's mostly cement, and roads with painted lines and adjacent signs
They are kind as they show you how to drive places in hasty time
Stuck, are you facing lights? Yeah you gotta wait in line because I heard if you drive through them it's a crime and you'll have to pay a fine

There, a rhyme ...

My apologies for not checking in.

And my apologies for knocking you out in the first round.

No one's ever felt your rhymes, no one's feeling you this time
Put a 'hook to my mouth' and I won't be 'reeling from your lines'

when temp turns up, y'all burn till you're on the floor sore
Check the rec ...

Signed.

Uppin for some feedback.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/cheers-to-rehab-vt11499.html


Lyrically fashionable but I switch styles more than per season
Y'all are boring I'm 'sleeping on your pieces'
Like we were playin chess for hours, it creeps upon you easy,
Gotta keep this God, Jesus whatever at bay like Hay-zeus
was ...

This is sick, like a few said before there were no kinks in the flow whatsoever. Personal drop of course and you showed good emotion especially in the line where you wrote about ripping your heart out. Very good perspective shown I could totally see where you were coming from the whole way through ...

'There was a kid I knew called Chris Cones, my name is Chris Cones' lmao

But cool I'll be the angel. Hows about something like 6 bars for the intro, then we'll handle imagery and setting the scene in 1st person (angel and devil) bar for bar?

Do you have msn this will make it a lot easier ...

Coupon books. Am I doing this right?

The flow was fire, all the multis and inners seemed quite intricate, and well placed. Definitely made this drop more entertaining to read, because I felt the rhythm. I'd like to see you write something similar to this now, to see how much you've elevated because this was dope as hell.

Wu-Tang Clan - Protect Ya Neck

Good ideas. How about the revenge one, where we tell the story, but we take Angel/Devil roles like in Guilty Conscience? That could work.