uppin`

shit man i aint just hungry for money shit i need a deal
i cant keep spending my life scrounging with out a peak at real
i feel to cheap to steal so im snaggin ropes and chains
i try not to fall off but under the pressure i choke and strain
provoking pain like the evilness that is contained in vane ...

yeah i liked this shit went good with the beat, digging the message and topic, good drop bro

my mind is corrupted cynical angers an abrupt shift
sometimes my mentals like a rat trapt inside a bucket
i want to say fuck this but its like fighting gravity
lives a living tragedy a comedy with irrational rationing
im drastically past imagining that i'm placing in the rat race
out of the ...

this was allright not that great, structure was fucked off
improve the structure improve the flow

peace

bitch ass mother fuckers get slayed
falayed with 10 inch seraded blades
fuck a renegade i'm sickness i'm AIDS
watch these mitch bades get sprayed
wit pellet bomb grenades, fuck a hit list
i'm pickin up phone books with clenched fists
tellin these suckah emcees to get pinched
cause they all ...

i'm drippin tears smearin my ink on the page
cause you passed away
thinkin of the things i'll never get to say
always so far away, so i never got to save a day
to talk to you and reminiss on your younger days
i find myself hurt inside
cause you died, and at first i couldn't cry
it took a minute ...

lol this actually wasnt that bad

(i hate kanye)

but besides that i liked the message about how rappers these days at least the rich ones lost sight of whats real its all jibberish.

but the flow was off like a mother fucker, good read, read like a POEM, more than a rap..

but i definately like to ...

Methodman and ODB

some fucking vote WTf

yo this read good iver the beat more like a spooken word piece pretty simple, flow was on for the most part fell off in places cause of the rhyme scheme

but an enjoyable read good key man

i agree with TOYH this was weak

both disses were soft like pillows

Creative gets personals cause of the various name plays
m v my votes shit.

M. Vario gets flow, not by much but his shit was simple so i flowed well

Creative gets punches even though the punches thrown were feather weight, but ...

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these were alright pretty simple good mutis in places others were almost hittin, no real stand out lines

liked the first key flowed the best

i would like to see more,

keep elevating

lol yeah that pickle jar pick your scars line is a meta4 for glass cuts just a tricky line

thanks for the feed people

and the positive deconstructions still im uppin