I want to try my hand at this tournament

Announcer- We're Ready, tell us a little something to start it off
2Complex- Alright lets start off small...

Hip-to-a-hop, over this beat i trot
Want knowledge, let me give you some food for thought
So just STOP, and listen to this hip-hop tradition
To bring the game back is my mission
creatin hot ...

For all your hurt and pain, I am ya remedy
For all the guilt and shame, I am his enemy
My heart subliminally, falls when you descend from me
since you befriended me, i've felt the chemistry
Usin your-beauty
as-a-disguise
a mask full of lies, i see the pain in your eyes
Like rain in the sky or a ...

thanx for the feed

Chorus(Scratched)2x
Bring it, Bring It, Bring It
Bring it back to the days
I said
Bring It, Bring It, Bring It
Bring It back to the days
Of Real Hip-Hop
Yeah

(Verse 1)
See Real Hip Hop, that's what we waitin for
Girls, Cars, and Money, I'm startin to get bored
So lets start back the hiphop ...

Can i get any kind of feed, i'm 2complex from hiphop ave(which is now closed), is this site that dead?

CAn i get some feed please

I really didn't enjoy reading this piece(no offense), the flow was mad confusing you titled it Obama but it switches topics alot, i think you need a good amount of work, IMO

Chemical viles of intelectual styles
So sick to death, they still sittin in trials
Patterned tiles, of a flow so wild
Burn the atmosphere, pure heat never mild
Lyrical sensation, sparks revelation
Words based off more than presentation
In a time in need for restoration
Time for me to teach-the ...