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Imaginary superhero that likes food

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Superheroes are myths,what a traumatization
I should have thought up such a brilliant creation
So a doodle that made would make some income
copyright it, then make cake and then some
I should sue for sexual harassment and win the case
but it wouldn't be harassment if shes in my face
an R-Rated comedy with no jokes in the script
is how I feel when words are flowing from my lips
unimaginable events like animals talking in cartoons
if that happens then the vandalizing will start soon
people need an odd occurrence to justify lunacy
too much soda and time spent on computer screens
give me some water, grits and turkey bacon
some fruit and wrestling dvd's while im waiting
waiting for what? Good question! help me out
maybe later, peace, it's time to bounce...






...Not just yet, what if I made a cape?
out of decorative rope, duck tape and drapes?
with a sidekick to assist my missions
signature style modes in our interventions
like theme song and a sequence of actions
that goes to the movies for audience satisfaction
video games could be put out for customer consumption
but it would suck, so no press at our luncheons
decades later the movie could be remade
I could watch to say "hey I never dressed that way"...

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Lol

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loving it.... see u still coming with that comedic flavor lol... good drop... funny... a lil simple but it flowed well...

good to see u droppin here though... keep up
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Post by Defiance »

hahahaha nice man the shorter bars make the flow pop and shit was funny too.. maybe need a lil more complexity but thats it.. keep it up man
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