I'm Collectively Sick Son

[JDR]

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/graci ... 20199.html

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Call it the collapse of the newbs, you niggas gettin harrased & abused
But its tha facts that I use, Collectively Ill? most the board don't even know HALF of ya crew
I'd love a match wit ya dudes, I'd leave you exposed, chewed, & broken
& no wonder yall won the collaboration award when ya WHOLE crews votin'
My flows truth spoken, recited, & with yall, you’ll never see me lose
Jacks not an easy dude, watchin’ the same exact story like the repeat news
You niggas can beef wit me too, Murk get finished & abused quick
My niggas a nuisance, & Orfadox, it’s obvious you either British or stupid
A team menaced wit loose lids, I’m as hard as ya cast claim
Yall started a laugh game but who tha fuck is Blok B besides a retarded ass name??
Neva heard of this herb before, but I’m curious to watch these fuckin’ queers
You never gots nothin’ feared, Flip so embarrassed by yall that he stopped comin’ here!
Damn. Jack in freestyle mode & this like a story Ive got to say
Kau is surely not gay, but to see a Lion on the stage, you’d need the Dorothy & Oz play
Yah. That’s a Broads Way, no problems for me to take ya team bitch
Illaborate, I hate ya weak spits, Tha zombies shits gay & all ya other make believe shit
I’ve seen Punch keystyle in the box, and believe me, he couldn’t afford the last load
Cadence & Deception is so irrelevant, they prolly don’t even know ya boards passcode
I don’t beef wit bitches, when Jack get done talkin’, I’ll put a gunner in ya view
I juss know these Collectively Ill cats are odd like the number in ya crew

[The Gonz]

Not at all a good text color for us mobile browsers. Will peep when I gets on a real computer

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[leeroi green]

i'm on a laptop and i had to look at it from that negative angle to see it please edit would really like to read this piece

[JDR]

Oops..thot it was an off white but it musta been really off.

[leeroi green]

lol that shit is classic dis material i dont got beef with none of em but i want in

[Kuhlerblynd]

Wow, fair enough, how about one of the C.I. break down his opinion..

Call it the collapse of the newbs, you niggas gettin harrased & abused
But its tha facts that I use, Collectively Ill? most the board don't even know HALF of ya crew

Okay, Ilike the set up and punch, but real talk, half the board doesnt know who you are either lol. However, I'm not saying that to take away from your opener. Nice job here.

I'd love a match wit ya dudes, I'd leave you exposed, chewed, & broken
& no wonder yall won the collaboration award when ya WHOLE crews votin'

Aight, nice punch here. Only thing is, this personal isn't EXACTLY true, but you know, you did nice with this. No complaints.

My flows truth spoken, recited, & with yall, you’ll never see me lose
Jacks not an easy dude, watchin’ the same exact story like the repeat news

Self hype. Doesn't belong in the verse, because this isn't about you, you feel me? Its a good line, but out of place IMO.

You niggas can beef wit me too, Murk get finished & abused quick
My niggas a nuisance, & Orfadox, it’s obvious you either British or stupid

Well, he's British. I like the concept beihnd the idea, but IMO you could have done better on this bar.

A team menaced wit loose lids, I’m as hard as ya cast claim
Yall started a laugh game but who tha fuck is Blok B besides a retarded ass name??

Haha that's good. I'm just surprised you didnt make a block/corner reference... Figured you would involve the street somehow on that, so a fresh way of just getting at him.

Neva heard of this herb before, but I’m curious to watch these fuckin’ queers
You never gots nothin’ feared, Flip so embarrassed by yall that he stopped comin’ here!

Dude, he stopped coming by before that, but I LOL'd at the bar. Well written.

Damn. Jack in freestyle mode & this like a story Ive got to say
Kau is surely not gay, but to see a Lion on the stage, you’d need the Dorothy & Oz play

Nice one here. I like how you flipped his name.

Yah. That’s a Broads Way, no problems for me to take ya team bitch
Illaborate, I hate ya weak spits, Tha zombies shits gay & all ya other make believe shit

This is one of the best personals IMO because Ill really likes the zombie tip and that angle when writing verses. Not sure how you knew that, but nicely done.

I’ve seen Punch keystyle in the box, and believe me, he couldn’t afford the last load
Cadence & Deception is so irrelevant, they prolly don’t even know ya boards passcode

Okay, Deception, that might be true, but Cadence not so much. He's been in many forums of the site with some consistancy. I think you should have just left this diss for Decept and made another for Cadence or something like that. Other than that, another solid bar.

I don’t beef wit bitches, when Jack get done talkin’, I’ll put a gunner in ya view
I juss know these Collectively Ill cats are odd like the number in ya crew

Our crew number is even, and your first line says you don't beef wit bitches, but you picked the fight. You can come better on your closer than that.


Over-all, another solid diss fromJack. You Illest shit is far better though fam. I think I would have picked apart the crew, piece by piece, instead of trying to tie two peeps into one punch type stuff.You did a good job overall though.

[blokB]

jack and jill went up th hill but they never came back
jacks hooked on heroin, jills medicine is crack
wrapped up in amp cables and found dead in a sack
dont fuck with bloks name unless you his boy or his chap

real talk pimp. i aint no battler. thats just a quick key that came off the dome. but if you challenge my crew.... i wont back down. loss or not.
C.I Truth

[JDR]

Yah you know Im havin' fun Murk. Was a quick piece not much put into it. Thx for the feedback. BTW, i counted 9 on the collectively ill page.

[Kuhlerblynd]

There's 8, unless you counted the word AND lol.

-- Sun Jan 16, 2011 1:15 pm --

Oh, you could have counted it before I removed Deception from the crew as well. Maybe that's what it is. My bad on that one then.

[JDR]

Hmm not exactly a response I was lookin' for. Figured at least one collectively ill member would throw somethin' back as a response. You gotta love tha silent treatment!

[Quix]

yes Jack, Get these chumps!


HAha ma main JAck just shat on ya crew! lol hot shit man

[IntrinsicCadence]

Ha, this was alright, but next time you come at us bring it stronger. This felt like just a warm-up piece or something, didn't have much punch behind it, and far from personal. I read this without a single "damn! nice punch!" but with more of a ongoing miniscule chuckle.

[JDR]

No point in bringing anything stronger. Nobody in ya crew really battles. Kinda a waste.

[ScottJames]

No point in bringing anything stronger. Nobody in ya crew really battles. Kinda a waste.

Then why diss them?

[JDR]

Coz I was pretty sure they had battlers. But Murk & Lion is really the only two I see. Figured it would create some fun interestin' back n forth drops but it hasn't.

Plus shits borin' around here. Need somethin' different.