Dirty Bitch

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Phasewon
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Dirty Bitch

Post by Phasewon »

Old ass verse I stumbled upon,
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[Phasewon]
I know this bitch, who's a thief and a crook
With STD's, and every sex disease in the book
She's the reason you're shook, and filed divorce
Now she's lyin' in court, suing you for child support
While you were buyin' her Porsche, she was thinkin' of me
Down on her knees, in the bathtub, drinkin' my pee
She gobble the dick, used to be a modelin' chick
Now she's labeled a slut, 'cause we came in a cup, and she swallowed the shit
You should see the bitch off a bottle of Gin
When it's hollow and then she'll let you hit while she's slobbin' your friend
She got ten kids by nine different men that she's extortin'
Even orphans, two miscarriages, three abortions
Proceed with caution when you baggin' that chick
You better double strap, with bubble wrap attached to your dick
Now she's after your chips, that's what you get for trustin' the bitch
I bust on her lips, then she goes home and gives her husband a kiss

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With STD's, and every sex disease in the book
^lines repetative, but for rhyming purposes i understand why you did it.
While you were buyin' her Porsche, she was thinkin' of me
Down on her knees, in the bathtub, drinkin' my pee
^rather simple, but funny image to draw in my head lol
She got ten kids by nine different men that she's extortin'
Even orphans, two miscarriages, three abortions
Proceed with caution when you baggin' that chick
^nice rhyming skill. it works if i stretch the words in delivery.
I bust on her lips, then she goes home and gives her husband a kiss
^ nice finisher to say you have STDs aswell lol.

Good piece, some lines were rather long, but good drop man.

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haha this was pretty cool man for what it was

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nice...i thought it wuz pretty sick, nice flow and rhyme scheme
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She got ten kids by nine different men that she's extortin'
Even orphans, two miscarriages, three abortions
Proceed with caution when you baggin' that chick
You better double strap, with bubble wrap attached to your dick
Niice presence here... these lines are dope

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