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Post by AntiMaTTer »

i got mentioned 2 times, awesome 8-)

the flow was nice, nice punchs at people i like how you went at the whole site. maybe if you came this nice in our battle you wouldnt have that FUCKING UGLY -1 in your record :)
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lol. Don't feel special. If it wasn't you then it would've been someone else and quickly. I'm just glad it came to someone that gets as much satisfaction as you do my brotha!

& Thx for the feed.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Nice shit, man. Nothing I can say that already hasn't been said, I always favor whole site disses and this one is definetley up there. Consistent punches and nice spin on personals on the people you mentioned.

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Thx 4 tha feedback Bill. Much aprpeciated my brotha. & Plex, I understand your comments on Koms. I dont' hate the kid or anything it was just the nature of the diss haha. I aint hatin' on nobody.
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Post by TJ Blaque Aka TL »

aight im new here so some of these bars i dont get cuz i caught the ass of it.

other than that this drop was solid. i can dig it my dude. flow delievery i mean the whole works. nobody is perfect and of course you can expect some shit off, but this piece was aight to me.

be easy my dude.
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Welcome to Illest & thx for tha feed.
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JDR wrote:Is it me? Or does his record lately resemble Bill in his older days?

& Ekoms, juss wanna feed and lock spits, you really don’t need the Mod shit
Coz its gotta be hard trying to stay neutral when you a leech on Scotts dick

Coz discussin’ the illest is like a boat ride, I tend to get a little CEE sick

It’s like tryna figure out one of Hazards drop, it’s to hard to understand it.

Jack Da Rippa bout his dolla bills so wat the fuck I need wit a Qwarter??

I’m poundin’ on these peeps, and I’m bout to rock ya shit Plex
But ever since Murk came, I’d be surprised if you’ve got a dick left
Murk, I see the collab ya dudes stressed,& I’d clap ya newbs text
But the way Rugged only fucks wit rookies, you won’t even have a crew left

& Yes Sir, I’m glad to talk sports to an overweight Byran Scott

Come wit a gat plan from me, and stick Ruckus for his Afghan money

None you bitches are safe and I know the doom seems hard
So Imma wet backs wit punches right before I take Loon’s green card
Jack, you a fuckin' mad man :lol: You need a fuckin' hug or somethin' LOL!
:clap: Standin' O' to this one.

P.s. Toyh do look like Byron Scott LMFAO!
aka Riggz u bitcheeeees!!!!

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Post by drunken jesus »

i liked this it flowed and went together well from start to finish, only complaints is it's a bit longer than it needed to be you could probably cut some of the weaker lines and have a better verse overall, & i thought the line @ me could've been alot better, cool shit overall though i'm gonna have to go back and check your first one i don't think i read it
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Jack has a lot of anger doesn't he?

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No. Who are you again??
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