Freestyle to my Grandpa RIP PT1

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Freestyle to my Grandpa RIP PT1

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It's been 6 years since you've left my life.
This year is when everything will get right.
Moms done went crazy wit out you now.
Matt lost custody of his kids and i'm wondering how.
Things changed since you left our house.
Matt had kids destinys 4 jazz is 2.
My dad still continusouly run his mouth.
I'm in college i can't beleive i made it wit out you.
I been writing for awhile but you're the only one who had faith in my talent.
I'm lost and so stuck without you, Moms sick dad had a heart attack now this.
Is where the whole story seems to change.
My dads going crazy slowly losing his brain.
Going through the same shit that happened to you.
Bad memory and old age yeah all this is true.
What am I to do. Sitting here stuck and lost.
Fuck the cost, Matts mind is stuck on green but it's not moss.
He's going through the system now re-hab.
Damn my grandpa i miss him and u see it bad.
I member all the days we shared together.
All the nights i sat up prayin for u to get better.
Untill that cold morning getting woke up by mom to tell me you died.
I had a dream that same night just wondering why.
Why does things have to be so hard, No car, No job.
I've been lost wishing i could go far, No bars, No odds.
Walking around and through montains and waters.
Looking for singal but still no service.
And she just aint the same if you can talk to yout daughter.
Things could be a better day instead of being worthless
Never let life live you, You always live life.
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Post by Dunay »

Sorry to hear about your loss man, takes some balls to drop shit like this, props. Technical complexity aside, not many people would be willing to state all that information publicly. 10/10.
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heres my version to my gramps


Look here geezer, im yung n cool n i dont need a oxygen tank niether
Ima put on a white bed sheet jump out n scare you till u Seizure
dont walk with ur cane cuz i'll stick my leg out and trip you
each time i come over you cook me that nasty ass fish food
dat shit is yucky!!!!!!!!!
Ima gurl u prick

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Post by thaphantom »

Thanks for the responses. i'll put a pt 2. it's alot i wasn't finished just couldn't write anymore. and can someone delete this rookie ^^? uppin for more feed
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