ENLIGHTEND -VS- CBK (Light wins by KO)

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ENLIGHTEND -VS- CBK (Light wins by KO)

Post by Enlightend » Thu Mar 29, 2012 9:04 am

OK so house rules... 4 bars... 24 hours... check in if u must...
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Re: ENLIGHTEND -VS- CBK

Post by CBK » Thu Mar 29, 2012 9:37 am

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Re: ENLIGHTEND -VS- CBK

Post by Enlightend » Thu Mar 29, 2012 10:13 am

Quick Work...


Mic Executioner is listed as his occupation... Dr Conrad Murray killed Michael Jackson

Constant claims of deadly precision, but still in battles ur steady the victim
So why should I DIG DIRT? When I got the MILE STONES to BURY YOU with um
in fact i'll smash and bend ya, like seventy percent of ur past contenders
come back kid? but its ur only choice since you lost to every active member
now my bomb raps surely, knock you out quick cus i made contact early
and dude you couldn't EXECUTE A MIC(mike) if you was DR CONRAD MURRAY
as far as this jerk is concerned I SPIT LYSOL the way im MURKIN THIS GERM
so how you MANAGE TA BATTLE, when HOMER ur just WORKIN FOR BURNS
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Re: ENLIGHTEND -VS- CBK

Post by CBK » Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:45 pm

EXPO'S..
I don't need no motherfuckin expo's....


Yo,i'll fuck up any youngin hussy, no my DICK ISN'T FRIGHTENED
but the closest my tongue will go to pussy is when im LICKIN' ENLIGHTEND...
look g,those lyrics can NOT TOUCH ME KID, unlucky bitch you GOT FUCKED v QUIX..
I got more replies on a note about text ho's, who use expo's... than your dopest post "SCOTT DUCKED ME" DID.
looked up "light, in boston" it was useless in finding news of you rhyming.. no RUMOURS OF YOU SHINING
the only enlightend thing in boston is fruitless, used less an hiding in SECLUDED, LITTLE BREWSTER ISLAND
I never thought light'd fall for my call, to battle at all but I saw I could CAPTURE YA,torture an PACKAGE YA
I'll put light-end in a box like a sort of TORCH MANUFACTURER.


i edited this a bunch of times to get my structure straight,, i dunno if thats against the rules an shit but if it is.. sue me

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Re: ENLIGHTEND -VS- CBK

Post by ILLoKWENT » Thu Mar 29, 2012 5:00 pm

mvgt enlightend

just a more cleaner verse, punch wise, structure,

cbk, you need to work on ya structure, the lines are too long in each, and makes the punch lose its steam toward the end...

any disagreements, pm or battle...

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Re: ENLIGHTEND -VS- CBK (Ready 4 Votes)

Post by thadevious1 » Fri Mar 30, 2012 7:08 pm

punches... enlightend
multies... CBK
wordplay .. enlightend
personals ... tie
flow .. enlightend

enjoyment ... enlightend

if i add it all up enlightend had a stronger verse
and came a bit harder than CBK
so my vote goes to enlightend


vote= enlightend
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Re: ENLIGHTEND -VS- CBK (Ready 4 Votes)

Post by The Architect » Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:47 pm

not sure what the cat's are based on so just gonna vote on what i find most important

punches: enlight
personals: cbk
rhymescheme: enlight (cbk's seemed a little forced)
flow: enlight (just read smoother for me)
creativity: enlight

Vote- Enlightend

not the worst battle, not the greatest, thought enlight took this by a landslide imo. cbk didn't do terrible, though i think you're either putting too much effort in it, or not enough, both can mess you up when writing and not just in battles but keep at it
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Re: ENLIGHTEND -VS- CBK (Ready 4 Votes)

Post by AntiMaTTer » Sat Mar 31, 2012 8:45 pm

look g,those lyrics can NOT TOUCH ME KID, unlucky bitch you GOT FUCKED v QUIX..
I got more replies on a note about text ho's, who use expo's... than your dopest post "SCOTT DUCKED ME" DID.

i literally said "damn..." thats a good personal flip and pretty well wrote. the flow was lil forced on the multi side on this punch but it i liked it.

looks like CBK already lost due to KO though lol oh well good battle gentleman


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