I liked this, smooth flow and decent .this was entertaining ,

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This is the first time reading a piece of yours and I am impressed by it,made it pleasant to follow with the flow and multis ,flawless to me bra,very hard hitting, it definetly is awesome,goNna wait for more from you, [ Post made via Mobile Device ] http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/images/mobile/Mo...

Upping for feed

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Uppin for feed

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Anybody...7 bars

house rules, 3 days to post after check

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I liked your verse,great metaphors,good flow and alot of good lines,nice closer...i did do a little more detailed explanation but it got erased...but,good job

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Thankz haz,upping

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This was nice,a lot of people can relate to what you talking about and connect with it,flow was tIght and. Good multIes, ill piece that I enjoyed thoroughly ,keep up that. G,its deep...

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Something simple EVILUTION Its a chemical reaction as i was a lab rat,i turned fiend./ Its an inevitable pattern,your shag lacks the journey / of big testicles i orgasm with,i have a bad sack,learn gs./ Take a trip through my vision,my snakes will strip your hearts mission/. Break ya lift as a king ...

Yea why not...3 days homey ,4 bars?

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Yo skeptic,your vote is a little short. Not much detail ,as the rules states...only detailed votes accepted. [ Post made via Mobile Device ] http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/images/mobile/Mobile%20Device.png Yo skeptic,your vote is a little short. Not much detail ,as the rules states...only detaile...

Check

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Sent my verse to speakers ...

I guess topical is my thing...aint talented text battler

upping for votes

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I like this piece.nicely written,i like your wording and the way you expressed your ideas...nice job,flow multis were good though i agree with kau..keep it up

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I wrote this at my weakest.wrote this after 15 days cuz of grade 12 exams..so thats why it aint as deep and tight as i like to gett

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