Imagery is on point, and I have a lot of appreciate for off-rhymes like "selfishness" with "therapist"... it's a style I appreciate a lot because it's unpredictable and gets people to listen more. Dope as fuck piece and I can flow it almost perfectly, until I got to the end I los...

First of all, where do you get your beats? Cuz this is dope as fuck. Do you do the mixing yourself? Your flow and mic presence is sick as fuck. You also touched on real topics, but did it in a fast and rhythmic way which kind of reminded me of Nas a little bit. I'm assuming you're from the East Coas...

Yea you're right, I like the topic and your flow is better and you got the quickness goin on. Rhymes are cool, too. But all my feedback from the other drop still applies. Like I said, you definitely got real potential so don't give up on this shit. But if you want feed on your tracks or other posts,...

Thanks for checkin' it out. Uppin for more feed, I put a lot of work into this one. Leave a link for any battle, beat, written, song, etc. and I will return the feed.

This was a flawless piece. It was on some grown man shit: Dealing with what happened, expressing your emotions, but handling it and not being a bitch about it. You also had clever punchlines and unique multiple rhyme schemes.

10/10 --- good shit...

Real talk, this might be one of the best writtens I've ever seen. I've followed your work a little bit and am constantly impressed. You use impressive vocab in a comprehensive manner, and your multis smash on most everybody else's. Beyond that, you can tell a story which I think is more difficult to...

Naw, I don't think he was trollin, I've rapped with people like that before. There's just a lot of dope writers on Illest, so our standards are set higher, but there's legitimately a lot of shitty MCs out there.

I hate sayin this cuz I got a soft spot for girls who flow cuz that shits sexy as fuck, but if I were really tryna help you out I would say you got a ways to go. I'll give you a list of pros and cons Pros You got confidence and with a few months of constant practice you could have an impressive mic ...

CBK took all categories besides flow. Synapse, you got the right idea, and I like the way you flow cuz I can read it easily and I have a similar style... BUT you gotta come more direct. Get to HIM personally, and if all else fails, flip his name around a bit to get the crowd's attention. CBK, the di...

Left feed for: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/topic-battle-old-vt18105.html http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/justice-for-ma-n-i-g-g-a-trayvon-vt25932.html And I don't want to come off as hyping my own shit because that's not what I'm about, but I take a lot of pride in this piece, so I think you...

Since Vietnam i could tell things were wrong... Way back in 1965 when i was honorbly discharged... Not really pissed off, but decided to join up with Naval Intelligence... They said id get a hefty payload if i was Able to Settle In... Start Taking their Medicine like ephedrine Laced with a Sedative...

lol @ Alvin. Funny as fuck. To BigDazzieDaddle: Read this. I'm gonna try to do you a legitimate favor, so please be open-minded. I hope you're not too sensitive to what we've been saying, just cuz this is really how you get better by hearing this kind of shit. You wouldn't believe some of the shit I...

my dude, you honestly killed it with this one. you kept it personal and raw, yet easy for all of us to relate to... which is a hard balance to create in Hip Hop. Everything about this piece was just on point. I give you a lot of props for this one.

[center] Greed Before you reach the sky, you gotta create a tower And a balcony to look down at the fakes and cowards It seems like each day that they waste their hours Each lame excuse and complaint gets louder Why do we let our leaders decide which fate is ours? Just cuz you felt some rain, you di...

He's talking about Trayvon Martin and addressing the issues of racism in our country. Although yea I agree it was a little confusing