that's true, I'm always checkin up on this site, but no ones ever on, whats up wit that?

I am not God, but my arrival is clear, the link to raps last hope of survival is here everything you put down in this shit shows who you are stop disrespectin yourself by sayin you a star swingin ya sub par, and quit fuckin lyin u fool, 'fore I drown yo bitch ass and let you die in a pool and u aint...

this is impressive yo, I usually read with a particular rhythm, sorta like an iambic pentameter, so when i read i kinda look for the stresses and shit, that's just how i am, I don't know if i have the right judge ur skills since u guys have been in this shit for fuckin ever, haha but i thought you g...

hey thanks a lot man. I feel you on the fact that the topic aint so fresh, but it's so damn hard to find something to write about nowadays... I'm just takin a jab at the subject myself. lol "Arvincible" comes from my name, (Arvin) and yeah Vince Carter already took "Vinsanity" so...

yo, i just wanted to drop somethin more serious and realistic this time so you intellects out there can see that I'm real. Tell me what you think Figure this, the vigorous government's got us twisted like licorice the liquor "bliss", got us tipsy and turnin to laws listed, too rigorous bra...

haha yeah I'm a flip but I'm in so-cal. Born n raised there though.
And Dom, that isn't polite.

This is going to be my first piece here, so let me know how hard it hits. Thanks. When I pull it, people lay twisted where my bullets' ricochet hit 'em With what I wish to say written, I'm condemned to spray victims But may my flow fly, uplift 'em, ain't never lettin go of my spittinz I'm cold hear...

oh so i have to up my rep or money? through feedbacks?
my bad this is the first real rap forum i've ever been on

wow you are on another level man.

respect.

Thanks man, I'm 20.

i read some of the comments and I like the shit you guys put down.
How do you set up a battle?

uhh how does this site work? hah.

check it out you bout to feel the pain ill embed it in ya brain i shoot hoops and im wetter than the rain can't lie i can't explain why there's no convincin' you you messin wit the star, its the A-R-vincible instrumental principles, with damage in each syllable u made of paper cuz im rippin you you ...

check it out you bout to feel the pain ill embed it in ya brain i shoot hoops and im wetter than the rain can't lie i can't explain why there's no convincin' you you messin wit the star, its the A-R-vincible instrumental principles, with damage in each syllable u made of paper cuz im rippin you you ...