Ur definitely improving... it seems u may have figured out what a punch line is... flow was good... but the Simpson line was not working at all... but like I said ur improving so... thumbs up there

this was honestly the nicest piece i read from you... but this is also my type a drop... the first 16 had an incredible flow and read like a story i was really digging the imagery... the second part was deep and lyrical the story itself kinda got lost in that... but based on the topic it worked... t...

oh my bad CBK forgot to put in my expos "SKYLINK" IS A TELECOM COMPANY BASED IN FRANCE.... oh well

this guy is lost when it comes ta typin hot and, he was heading for death, so i tried ta stop him but he must be confident, or just lying often, cause the little chicken's admitting the sky is fallin a 88skylink ? well thats what i thought till, i realized he opens up cause he likes his garage fille...

check...

Future... so u WANNA-BATTLE huh!?! well DOG-I'LL-SCALP-YA so kid my advise in THAT,-IS-VERY-SIMPLE-RUN!!!// im a BEAST-RHYMING, so KEEP-TRYING ta BE-"SHINING" but ill still take "JACK",-FOR-EVERY-"NICKLE-SON" i thought this was ur best punch, i came across very clever, ...

i peeped some of there shit... it should be good!!!

and as for my predictions, i think that i will win a lot and so will murk, quix and kau...

idk if jack vs future is the prologue to what this tourney can be then wow.... this is gonna be one helluva tourney

I liked it flow was insain from both... imagery was there, and in horrorcore type verse that seems to be most important... u didn't go overboard with the gore... thumbs up there cause that's where most people slip IMO... overall I Digg it keep writing yall...

no battle league here my friend just individual battles in the battle section or the tourney that already started, i would put ur name on the list in case of no show in the first round.. maybe they can squeeze u in not sure how that works though im not runnin it

dammit im bored to the point im managin snore, if i was in the cypher i would a been damagin whores, getting head while im connecting granite ta urs, ya got no room to talk cause im slammin the doors tryin ta rise up but ya crammin ta soar, while i stay off the top never plannin fa wars, i said drop...

MIC S bury his doom, like king tuts tomb leave em personally strewn Urgently soon, cuz imma end E.R like life in an emergency room ok so this would be better if his name was two words that started with e and r or even EndeR but as is not that great... im not a big fan of picking letter out of peopl...

I say komatose at this point... ive seen his drops on gm there pretty good so no hate its only cus on illest he has talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked talked ta...

i did NOT edit this pic... http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/resources/image/2267 quick expos... he acted like shazo cus he cant write topicals... he's the cockiest guy on illest... dash = Kloe kardashian's brand name... the old show "Great Scott" stars Tobey Maguire... Mario's a plumber.....

I will join..