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by ippiki_17
Fri Sep 16, 2011 12:23 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 11:11
Replies: 0
Views: 268

11:11

<r>Picture descriptive individuals with halos<br/> Speaking in god's tongue since Earth was a day old<br/> Banishing backbiters like Kratos<br/> While sinister serpents slip away into abeyance and recreate souls<br/> See the angels, 11:11's communication, and about that time<br/> I heard two were si...
by ippiki_17
Fri Sep 16, 2011 12:15 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Short Imagery
Replies: 5
Views: 784

Re: short imagery

You paint great pictures bruh, I'll be looking forward to more of your work. Soulo, I'll remember that lol.
by ippiki_17
Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:08 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Insane Verse
Replies: 10
Views: 855

Re: Insane Verse

I wanna be your apprentice, lol! The drop was crazy dude, I truly am a fan of your work. Keep it up man, I need some inspiration.
by ippiki_17
Tue Sep 13, 2011 11:54 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Everything In One
Replies: 3
Views: 521

Re: Everything In One

Thanks man, I gotta try to get more feed on this.

-- Tue Sep 13, 2011 11:54 pm --

Thanks man, I gotta try to get more feed on this.
by ippiki_17
Fri Sep 09, 2011 12:05 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Everything In One
Replies: 3
Views: 521

Everything In One

All I see in my environment are varmints Creatures that are harmless Trying to hard to intimidate my squadron Initiate and frolic with my feelings and often This Mt. Vesuvius explodes on Pompeii and all it's prospects And stays dormant just for while Digesting all these trials like the liver's bile ...
by ippiki_17
Fri Sep 02, 2011 1:11 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Trapped (Seeking Freedom)
Replies: 6
Views: 589

Re: Trapped (Seeking Freedom)

Multi Master, shit was dope.
by ippiki_17
Tue Aug 30, 2011 11:28 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: JUST NOTICE ME
Replies: 2
Views: 375

JUST NOTICE ME

<r>If I don't diverse, I'll be forlorn<br/> Like a revenant of one's soul holding on<br/> To whats left, hear my verse and be alert<br/> And to take heed to the words, I'm on the verge<br/> Of a perplexed thought, caught in the maelstrom<br/> Of hell's drums and a girl's export, there were so many t...
by ippiki_17
Tue Aug 30, 2011 11:18 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The man in this beast (cyphering)
Replies: 1
Views: 286

Re: The man in this beast (cyphering)

Definitely cyphering material my dude! You ripped it with those sick multi's that I like to read, I'm fan yo.
by ippiki_17
Tue Aug 30, 2011 11:12 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 88SkyLink - Multies
Replies: 10
Views: 972

Re: 88SkyLink - Multies

I liked the way you delivered your rhymes, it's what reeled me in, but the more I began to read your verse it seemed like it lost its structure with the punchlines. The multi's and everything were dope, but I just wish I could've read it all the way through like the way it started.
by ippiki_17
Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:39 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: He Can Fly!
Replies: 1
Views: 293

He Can Fly!

I'm in the sky, breathing in the oxygen And all it's awesomeness, closing my eyes Envisioning chinese provinces, I'm intolerant Towards meteorologist and predicted phenomenas That don't even happen often, animosity for the gossip They said I couldn't fly, now you see beneath the clouds When you look...
by ippiki_17
Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:37 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: I want feedback on this
Replies: 7
Views: 782

Re: I want feedback on this

Great flow and multi's, I just wish you would have written more rhymes. Nevertheless it was good, I'll be looking to more of your work dude.
by ippiki_17
Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:31 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: A Knock In The Night Ft. Vanity
Replies: 7
Views: 635

Re: A Knock In The Night Ft. Vanity

Good storytelling it was ill, I enjoyed the imagery and every descriptive piece of your work. Only so many brains can stay alert while reading this one. Great drop!
by ippiki_17
Wed Aug 17, 2011 2:22 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Star Spangled Stanzas
Replies: 6
Views: 700

Re: Star Spangled Stanzas

Yes!!! Finally some good feedback and criticism! That's all I wanted thanks guys.
by ippiki_17
Sat Aug 13, 2011 4:52 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Stay Classic
Replies: 9
Views: 755

Re: Stay Classic

You represented for the culture man I like this joint, finish that second verse yo lol!
by ippiki_17
Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:37 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Star Spangled Stanzas
Replies: 6
Views: 700

Star Spangled Stanzas

In this methodical trap We toggle big bottles of alcoholic beverages And go to bed with this accredited feeling of loss Killing us all, sickening thoughts spread misery Maybe life without you connected to it is meant to be Little boys murdering, girls want they titties bleached We in it deep, like t...

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