<r>Picture descriptive individuals with halos<br/>
Speaking in god's tongue since Earth was a day old<br/>
Banishing backbiters like Kratos<br/>
While sinister serpents slip away into abeyance and recreate souls<br/>
See the angels, 11:11's communication, and about that time<br/>
I heard two were ...

You paint great pictures bruh, I'll be looking forward to more of your work. Soulo, I'll remember that lol.

I wanna be your apprentice, lol! The drop was crazy dude, I truly am a fan of your work. Keep it up man, I need some inspiration.

Thanks man, I gotta try to get more feed on this.

-- Tue Sep 13, 2011 11:54 pm --

Thanks man, I gotta try to get more feed on this.

All I see in my environment are varmints
Creatures that are harmless
Trying to hard to intimidate my squadron
Initiate and frolic with my feelings and often
This Mt. Vesuvius explodes on Pompeii and all it's prospects
And stays dormant just for while
Digesting all these trials like the liver's bile ...

Multi Master, shit was dope.

<r>If I don't diverse, I'll be forlorn<br/>
Like a revenant of one's soul holding on<br/>
To whats left, hear my verse and be alert<br/>
And to take heed to the words, I'm on the verge<br/>
Of a perplexed thought, caught in the maelstrom<br/>
Of hell's drums and a girl's export, there were so many ...

Definitely cyphering material my dude! You ripped it with those sick multi's that I like to read, I'm fan yo.

I liked the way you delivered your rhymes, it's what reeled me in, but the more I began to read your verse it seemed like it lost its structure with the punchlines. The multi's and everything were dope, but I just wish I could've read it all the way through like the way it started.

I'm in the sky, breathing in the oxygen
And all it's awesomeness, closing my eyes
Envisioning chinese provinces, I'm intolerant
Towards meteorologist and predicted phenomenas
That don't even happen often, animosity for the gossip
They said I couldn't fly, now you see beneath the clouds
When you ...

Great flow and multi's, I just wish you would have written more rhymes. Nevertheless it was good, I'll be looking to more of your work dude.

Good storytelling it was ill, I enjoyed the imagery and every descriptive piece of your work. Only so many brains can stay alert while reading this one. Great drop!

Yes!!! Finally some good feedback and criticism! That's all I wanted thanks guys.

You represented for the culture man I like this joint, finish that second verse yo lol!

In this methodical trap
We toggle big bottles of alcoholic beverages
And go to bed with this accredited feeling of loss
Killing us all, sickening thoughts spread misery
Maybe life without you connected to it is meant to be
Little boys murdering, girls want they titties bleached
We in it deep, like ...