Vanity vs Grimm PLZ DO NOT VOTE, I POSTED THIS BCUZ IT WAS MY FIRST AND ONLY BATTLE AND I JUST WANT FEEDBACK TO IMPROVE....AND BCUZ IT WAS FUN!!! VANITY : Mr. Grimm you act like a mystical master, but you sound more like a lyrical disaster be still my beating heart, is your’s still beating you old ...

THE IDEA OF THIS SONG IS IT’S TWO LETTERS..FROM A GIRL INLOVE WITH A THUG WHO IS ABOUT TO BE RELEASED FROM PRISON SO NO CHORUS…enjoy VANITY : baby forgive me, please don’t leave me, baby believe me, it wont be easy, im just busy these were the last words you ever said to me i can feel your struggle...

this was really nice i liked it alot! keep it up!!

nice! both r good! trizz i liked urs alot simple but creative.

nice! i thought it was really good maybe basic but good overall

i liked it, even tho the sound quality wasnt great but it sounds real, i

nice! both were really good, nice flow, multies n metaphores

loved it! to long tho but worth the wait

different style, good!