been away for a min.
ur rules

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toyh took this battle
pryde ya verse is real choppy bruv
doesn't flow that good
toyhs punches were right there

vote Toyh

i'm liking this piece but u should switch it to the left, easier to read and catch the flow. I was liking ur vocab, multies are ok but like i said the flow is off due to it being centered. it works better like that on shorter pieces or if its broken into paragraphs. anyway decent read, keep at it. r...

Family who thought it was comin death put into action my cousin livin out his life with one foot in the casket but he kept his balance full of talent in life never fell through the hate the malice and strife but his heart wasn't in it in just a dozen minutes 8 shots his friend lived but why my cous...

ya skill is infitesimal I blow you mind out of this world like extra terrestrials ya wack n after this battle I'ma change your 1 and 12 record to a decimal ya havin a fling with another fag I'll murder you my mans bringin the leather bag it's not really fitting is it that your name consists of the o...

set it up

check

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I'll set it

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i had to much going on bruv
once i've settled down everything
then we'll go
cool?

It's intended for audio, still creating a beat to go with it.
Already nominated HOF on Netcees.

nice bruv
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