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Posted: **Tue Jul 22, 2008 3:07 pm**

Look, Punches is Hot, You`ll Think it Was Hell Hittin, i`ll Leave This "Man Without a Face" Like "Mel Gibson" ..
U No "Comp" To Me, So Start "Dell Switchin" Cus to Mah Body Count, i`ma "Add Dress" Like "Mail Listins" ..
Rell Spittin, Quick to Rip U Lames to Shreads, Dawg Either i`ma Michael Vick U Or Better Start Playin Dead ..
U a Hoe i`ll Take ya Bread, Buzz ya Wig Like i Shaved ya Head, & Have "D Ress" Like "Wade in Bed" ..
U Suck, i`m Use to Winnin, i`ll Shoot U Grinnin, Have ya Team Runnin in Circles, Some Coochies Spinnin ..
Mah Text Shots, is Like Rugers Pennin, & ya Trash Fam, ya Complexitiy Level is about as Sim Pool as Computer Swimmin ..
DT Should add Two K`s to His Name Cus No Negros Feelin` ya, U a Homo Pretendin to Be Hetero`s Killin ya ..
i`ll Have Metro Peelin` ya, Once Tha Steel Bust, i`ll Be Quick Leave "Kill Fucked" Like "Cases Of Nercophilia" ..

Posted: **Tue Jul 22, 2008 5:36 pm**

the flow was pretty straight
the mutlies were good
the vocab was a little off but well
shit it was pretty dope all around
the punches i think were great with the nameplay

keep'em comin

Posted: **Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:53 pm**

Flow Was A Lil Off in Some Areas
Tha Punches Was Murder And Yo Nameplay Was Nice.
They Defiantly Connected With Ya Punches

DT Should add Two K`s to His Name Cus No Negros Feelin` ya, U a Homo Pretendin to Be Hetero`s Killin ya ..

i`ll Have Metro Peelin` ya, Once Tha Steel Bust, i`ll Be Quick Leave "Kill Fucked" Like "Cases Of Nercophilia" ..

Rell Spittin, Quick to Rip U Lames to Shreads, Dawg Either i`ma Michael Vick U Or Better Start Playin Dead ..

U a Hoe i`ll Take ya Bread, Buzz ya Wig Like i Shaved ya Head, & Have "D Ress" Like "Wade in Bed" ..

Look, Punches is Hot, You`ll Think it Was Hell Hittin, i`ll Leave This "Man Without a Face" Like "Mel Gibson" ..
U No "Comp" To Me, So Start "Dell Switchin" Cus to Mah Body Count, i`ma "Add Dress" Like "Mail Listins"

^^^^ Fav Bars U Killed Him With This.

Posted: **Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:20 pm**

GoodLooks On Tha Feedback Fam ..
Uppin For More ..

Posted: **Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:25 pm**

this was an alright peice.
nothing to special about it.

some lines were good some just wernt.

Posted: **Thu Jul 24, 2008 4:00 am**

It was aight

Posted: **Fri Jul 25, 2008 8:56 am**

what happened to our battle fam?

overall this was pretty nice..good flow to it and the rhyme scheme was there as well..keep at it rell

Posted: **Sun Aug 03, 2008 8:01 am**

hahahaah This Was Trash,Show Me Where it actually Rhymes

Plus Can i have a refund on the last 2 Min of my Life back

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.. Dress is Killed ..

.. Dress is Killed ..