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If I'm terrible, at least I can see a Miracle//
spitting parable, as i become more lyrical//
its not bearable, to be spiritual//
when you have to plan your own burial//
just as a man, yet i think aerial//
which gives me a land of new material//

if my hand, is real, why can't i figure out how you feel//
or i'm always wrong, you know the deal//
your hand on my palm, thats so surreal//
these thoughts concealed, and tightly sealed//
so I'm revealed, hiding behind a mighty shield//
staring at the future, with a force field//

but i'll get through, i always do, if you only knew//
if you say it: its true: cuz even the false was the truth: construed//
thought about it? its taboo: i'm just givin you something to look into//
this is overdue, i actually thought we were over too//
though with a sober view, i can see me, holding you//
so we made it through, like we were aided with clues//

seems to be for a girl?...but it was pretty straight...i liked it

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hm i could take a guess as to who it was for but i wont it was straight, i dont really know how to judge a poem so yea.. was straight -snaps fingers-

well done. -claps-

for sure, lol first time ive read this, not bad at all, very interestin