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Ok so yeah First bit of wrighting ive done since I got out of jail....leave some feedback please


Im bout to enlighten these rap cats
scribe a rhyme so complex Einstine cant even fathom the consept
tha Bout im wrighting turns yours to crap acts
this tribe of mine grows like a vortex we intwine,I get at em your heart lept
cap rats fast,n get out like lightnin'
you slipped up had ya son "inline",a cons text(context) thats bauer on this hand
strap facts, last to spit yet win this with out even tryin'
gripped the cup ad one to my minds complex now scatter this my land.

Decent drop, u have a unique concept, its a bit confusing here and there, the multis kinda through off the flow, but its ok, u have some cool vocab, and interesting approach to show subliminality... keep it up man.


I don't know u but it looks to me that uve been on illest when it first started, but yeah if u battle let me know...cuz I wanna battle a vet.

thanks for the feedback
I haven't battled in fucking ages...or if I even have time anymore
Ill see what I can do.

welcome back

shit nice drop a little confusing but well
nice flow n concept
9/10
keep'em comin

thanks again..yeah some things most people won't get...if anyone needs clearing up of what I actualy ment just holla

ky ill was arrested on to catch a predator for trying to fuck an 11 year old boy he met online

wat tis up wit u ya postin a load of crazy shit every where

Mutual Hostility wrote:wat tis up wit u ya postin a load of crazy shit every where

hop off the gods dick

your breath probably be smelling like ballsweat and funyuns