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I can write stupid shit too......(Free..)

Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 11:22 pm
by MagicMark
Yo i once knew a guy who was all alone, in a jail
his body boney n' frail, no one made him feel at home when he came
but they said they felt at home when they "came"
oh what a shame, new bloke, choked like a dame
every emotion broke through the chains,
especially when "big axe" wanted to elope with his frame
caught spooning with another bloke, explodin' with aids
his ethopian name was ridiculed, dinners ended with fun
and no cons, had cons-iouses, no matter the pun
so after daily rapes, after a year he grew tired
of all the abusers n' liers, who shaved him with new pliers
where criers where despised worse than the sickest hack
couldnt enjoy meals, knew what was in his cell when he was gettin' back
a hairy sack, attached to a tatooed biker
who was smooth every else, except the place where he'd like it
offered, parole, he was delighted, but a plan became sick
faced a set up murder charge, that a hand couldn't fix
facing another twenty years, he thought of escape
a tunnel, incase? another shipment of date rapes

Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 3:40 am
by - Mutual -
man sum crazy shit
dope flow
8/10
was aiight
keep'em comin

Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 7:06 am
by Arvincible
lmao yeah this was stupid...

decent multies particularly better in the beginning, plot grew more outrageous as it went on, and yeah i feel sorry for that dude....

lol anyways 7/10 for the piece

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thanks

keep it up mark