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I wrote it, then was reading it and messed up, and freestyled some of it, so the lyrics are a little messed up. Its my first audio what you think?

fuckit......
plex, just let it run
turn the fucking beat down a little
yo this diss is for any fag fuck it
10 year olds should not listen


I sit back, with this fag, about to pull a mag
i've been gagged, by these hags trying to brag
burn them like the flag, as i return to the tag
that you have labeled me, which has enabled me
to use laws of gravity, actually savagely
if you want to battle me, pull my dick out ur anatomy
i disable pussy like a cavity, it must be sad to be
a emcee who erratically, goes around acting like me
so i'm packing the heat, which makes me complete
for defeat, of these peeps, trying to cheat
i'll leave ya sexually beat, fucking battery
acid that leaks from my throat when i choke
on my quotes, its flattery when goat grammatically
spoke illmatically to these jokes, 16 micz i provoke
each one left broke, easier then a bike spoke
fuck these white folks, trying to be black like coke
ends up the drug that gets sniffed by my nose
so i blow, all over these hoes, a substance that
flows, and can not be controlled, like shit in area 51
i'm the shifty one,
and u know, that my shit grows like fungus on toes
blood spreads thru ur clothes, so this evil i read to my foes
will oppose, the exposed, cartilage on ur back, which
proves ur spineless, as my moves of violence, put
these fools in silence, as i follow the rules of mindless

[ chorus goat ass ]


pussy exposed with more rolls then donuts
16 micz, is a rodent and he knows it
he likes my audio he jones it
but he wont spit, so where is my next opponent
give me a response, and ether will come
to the beat and the drums,
i'm seeking the guns
to leave ya bleeding in fun

aw lame im gettin back at you harder beef is beef. thx

you have no flow or presence and that effect you put on your voice was homo

Uh -- All Killah. I'm not trying to flow or have presence -- You fucking Tard -- And i was using the record in windows

You're not suppose to take goat serious

You used an effect to slow your voice or lower the pitch i can tell, you probably did it cause you sound like a retarded gerbil and didn't wanna make it sound anymore embarassing

all killah wrote:You used an effect to slow your voice or lower the pitch i can tell, you probably did it cause you sound like a retarded gerbil and didn't wanna make it sound anymore embarassing

dat shit was gayer den elton john...lol voice morphing...intresting..ummm sadly u had some parts dat coulda sounded good...and u killed dat beat...i dont think i can ever listen to it again...but ne ways...ummm...have fun...peace

I just love how honest you guys are.

hahaha, god damn, that was brutal, please, stop rapping and spare us all

wow that was a waste of the space on my harddrive that the track did take, so this is the wake of this fake flake who'll nameless he'll remain cause i don't know his name but yes he did sound so lame dawg u ain't got no game, Law would put u to shame, that effect that u used made u sound like a gay damien, if the devil was a fag then u'd fit in with the other "homo"sapiens eh yeah my text sucked but i think it was better than that track i heard good God made my ear drums bleed haha

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wrost beef rap i ever heard in my life u need sum better skills son

that pised me off, what a waste of time...lol