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I'm not really feelin the government and it's shady ways the past few years. Fox news is joke and a sell-out, The Republican's are bankroll-thirsty...people need to stand up! Exercise ur freedom of speech, educate urself of whats really goin on in the world. Personally...I'm voting Obama. Yea...we need a change. Just thought I'd throw a lil sumthin sumthin together of my thoughts and share 'em with you. Recognize the real.

Feedback, luv and hate is always appreciated. Thanks.

Lyric's are posted below.

Kurse
Album: Canvas of Sins
Written By: R. Bueno
Mixed By: R. Bueno
Produced By: Flawless
Recorded @ D-Lab 21 in Lombard, IL
Anger Manij'ment Entertainment Inc.
All Rights Reserved 2008 ©

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(Intro...)

1st Verse-
Ladies and Gentlemen Please open yo minds..
(release yourself) Quickly get wit the times and let these rhymes
help you defy the political struggle that our country denies..
cut all the ties to the lies and uh...
Move forward to the promise of repose and these hopes of serenity never depose..
I'm peaceful, but I bring heat when I need though..
bestow everthing that I bring to the table.
So stable..
..capable, able..
Che draped over my chest while Anger Manij' the label..
I'm fatal and sick of these fables..
You can call the president a leader, man I call him an A-Hole.
I been done..
Prevarication out' yo lung..
everything you claim to be is artificial so you're done.
You're obsolete, yea I got lots to speak, and everything that I see
is observed from a higher peak.
I'm a pinnacle of something that's critical..
all the anguish that I feel's got me to the point dat I'm clinical..
It's cynical.
..Relentless the essence of intenseness..
tends to be the root from where the press is.

(Hook) **Repeat 2x's
"If you knew the truth...
...if you see what I see...
I'm not dumbing down for nobody, the revolution's coming."

2nd Verse-
Fox news, hell might as well call it false news..
wit false truths, if you really knew it'd repulse you.
Counterfit propaganda, paid 'em money, gave 'em glamour..
anything the network want, they gon' get, mind ya manners.
Come on youngblood, excavate the verity, it's clarity..
we seek in the midst of popularity, it's charity..
that brings us to a moment of sincerity..
follow that lead and you'll find your prosperity.
And everything that I ever speak up on the wax..
America'll tax..
Republican's attack.
White collar corporate America..
...make an unbiased decision for once, I'm daring ya!
Try to take away our freedom of speech, let it leak..
by the end of the week, download it for free.
My knowledge is free, and everything that I speak, is unique..
you can't sink the truth when it's coming from me.

**Hook comes in 2x's

(Outro)

okay.. feed as im going along

first verse is nice.. it had good flow, good delivery, some words seems slightly stretched ie Relentless, which kind of made me focus on you voice rather than the track, yano?.. rhymes, multis where good.. the line with depose was hot multis, then it kind of got to.. -tion, type rhyming, ie. clin-ICAL, cynICAL, CritICAL... then ESS/ rhyming, nothing to get hung up on an audio, but lyrically that lacked a touch, sometimes it felt like multis where thrown in to sound good ie. stable, able, capable, im fatal etc.. this seemed to be the type of piece that had a message.. or is meant to, i didnt see alot of it, the che reference was nicely done, but you could have come up with something more creative than "the presidents an asshole", bit crude lol, not infittin with the piece, what i would rather have seen was a more venemous political attack, talking why you dont like them, different aspects, different examples, your own opinions on subjects, some spots your just talking about you can see it from a higher peak, and look at what i put on the table, but not actually saying your thoughts.. you get me?...

lets talk about the beat, its catchy and you ride the beat well with the lyrics, so no complaints there, delivery is also cool, hook wise, i like it, flows cool, has a decent message and is catchy enough.. what a hook should be.. not too complex..

next verse..

started off well, the same problems that are in the first verse are also in this verse, you have that rhyming - ITY/ITY, which isnt necessarily a problem, audio wise, as people like what sounds good, but from a lyricists point of few, this may show a lack of creativity, tho i believe this time they were used better, more for a point, tho i still got the impression some could have been taken out... first 2 bars of this where hot, good messag, good flow, then the rhyming kind of took over and the message got lost again, corporate america line was decent, then the problem of talking about you came back, im not saying you shouldnt talk about you, but the build up for this piece was pretty much, the government is shit, fuck em, then you came with, your thoughts, on your thoughts lol, if you know what i mean, not actually points of why you hate the gov, or at least not in the number i would have liked

so overall... its a good track, vocal clarity is good, expression is cool, delivery is good, beat and riding the beat where both good, so a solid audio track, but i felt the message was a little lost, trying to sound good with the rhyming and the message, the actually, fuck you goverment, never really came through as powerful as you / i / or you other listeners would have liked

so good ..7/10..

keep doing..

pretty dope, i liked this one better than ur others imo, lyrically anyways, the hook was nice too

i'll Leave Feed Ina Lil..
But i Feel Like Your Camp is a Buncha Hypocrits..
K.O. Said "The Whole Point of Audio is you don't post the lyrics
if you do that means you suck and your not made for this shit" etc etc.
But You Da General Of ya Camp is Posting Lyrics..
Not Talkin S hit jus Statin Facts ...

ehh its alright.
i mean its the same shit dont see no elevation. just crusin in a way not changin lanes or nething.

but liked the topic.
u hit it strong

-.HaZarD.- wrote:i'll Leave Feed Ina Lil..
But i Feel Like Your Camp is a Buncha Hypocrits..
K.O. Said "The Whole Point of Audio is you don't post the lyrics
if you do that means you suck and your not made for this shit" etc etc.
But You Da General Of ya Camp is Posting Lyrics..
Not Talkin S hit jus Statin Facts ...

To be fair, that doesn't make the whole crew hypocrits...it makes the person who said it a hypocrit. You can't take what 1 person of the squadd said and saftely assume we all feel that way because even though we're a unit...we do have differences in opinion.

As for the lyrics...my point behind posting them are for effect. Some of the artists in illest are audio-capable...but most of them are texters and look at the lyrical and written end of a song. And personally I feel that they over analyze the purpose behind an audio and only rate you based on the written end, and don't get the full effect of what the song is do to the fact that they are writers and not spitters. So I wanted to type out the lyrics after I posted the song, that way texters, writers and anybody else can get the full effect of the song. They can hear it or they can read it. But I want them to get the track as a whole and not just understand or comprehend certain points.

Maybe with KO, and a few others...they don't feel like doing texts. But as an audio artist I can understand that cuz once you have the capabilities of doin audio...then you always wanna do audio. Thing about my song here though...is it was an audio before it was a text. I wrote it, recorded it. But once it was posted...I typed it up for people to read what they might've missed. So it was an audio before it was a text, and not the other way around.

Aight..
It's All Good...

This Shit Kinda Reminded Mf Of 'Mosh'
Just Cause The Whole..

Ladies and Gentlemen Please open yo minds..
(release yourself) Quickly get wit the times and let these rhymes
help you defy the political struggle that our country denies..

Part^...

It's Cool When People Spit Opinionated Tracks..
Just a Better Way of Expression u Could Say..
The Flow Was Cool.. Lyrics Wus Aight.. i Aint Look For The Lyrical Tip.
Sorta Looked For The Message That Came Across...
i Mean it Wus Strait Dat u jus Voiced ya Opinion, niggahz Needa Do Dat More
Often.. ( Beef Aint Deaded).. Just Leavin Feed..

Take The Feed How You Want it..

Anyways Leave My New Joint Feed If U Can..

i like it, the beat is hot, the dude who made it is my homie, he works wit wale...the lyrics was hot too...i like the hook too, goes well wit the beat.

this was nice Kurse. Definitly my favourite track from you in a bit. The beat was sick and the delivery was dope as usual. You stepped it up lyrically which is good and you got your opinion across pretty decent too. haha a bit of singin for the hook too but it turned out nice imo. good shit overall a dope track

good track man.nice'ta hear u express urself again kinda like that other track wake up everybody or somethin u did,reminds me of that..what effect did u use on the chorus?u blended it in well..i wudnt use it allll the time but it was executed in this track nice so props. enjoyed the 2nd verse the most tho u came hard with all 3,no lines really stood out but it was a good song overall,keep em comin

Obama bitches lol 4 sho nigga fuck McGay i mean McCain lol shit was nice nigga i 4got 2 leave feed a while back u got off i ain't suprised nice as beat 2 dawg lol mmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiissssssssssssaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaahhhhhhdddddddddooooooooogggggggggeeeeeeettttttt on these bitches lol

Good lookin out on the feed as always mayne...
like always, your feed helps give me an idea of what direction I should take shit. But in the long run I always enjoy tryin new shit just to see how it feels and how it'll sound.

But thanks again, the feed is always luv! Remember if there's anything any of you need feeded in particular, just PM me with a link and I got you.

To everyone else...I'd still like to get more feed on this track...so help a brutha out!
1NE

Top-NOTCH. Kurse.. Fam, I'm totally down with this track. I'm a big fan of well-written political hip-hop and my friend, you nailed this piece. I wont lie, it's not the BEST political track I've heard, but dude, I can easily place this above, or at least on the same level as some of Immortal Tech's more popular tracks. To say I'm impressed would be a huge understatement. There's a (very) few scratchy spots where your "mesh" fell off a little bit, but that's minor compared to the strength of this piece. I highly suggest you bust your ass on all of your future tracks the way you did on this one (I can tell you gave more effort here) because you'll see your recognition hit the fan in no time. I think I've said enough. Keep this quality shit comin' fam.

Respect,
Tek

This track is pretty cool, I like the beat. I like that you put the lyrics up too.
And its good to see you rapping about politics.

HKX wrote:Obama bitches lol 4 sho nigga fuck McGay i mean McCain lol shit was nice nigga i 4got 2 leave feed a while back u got off i ain't suprised nice as beat 2 dawg lol mmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiissssssssssssaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaahhhhhhdddddddddooooooooogggggggggeeeeeeettttttt on these bitches lol

^HAHAHA. Typical Obama 'voter'