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Crown me!

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 9:49 pm
by Frank Black
[align=center]Yes the Crown Wearer is Back
You so average, I'm so savage
I Surround Terror in Wacks
a Hound Bless ya with Gats, so my crews is Comin' Violent
& like Sex when the Kids Sleep, You dudes is Fuckin' QUIET!
Your game Pick it Up, nvm bitch you suck, GIVE it UP!
My Style? Sick as Fuck, but like sex changes ima SWITCH IT UP!
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yo Nobody on my Level.. and they Never Will
I'm.. Forever iLL, I hit em with Clever kills
witta Better Deal, my Cheddar Build
just Check the Skills, you aye Lesser Thrill
you Better Chill, 4 Techs aye Squeal
& I aint Braggin just move with ay Passion
to Leave dudes in a Casket, ruling these Foolies thats Cracking
the Game Down ..
..to Smithereens
and I Feel the Breeze... and the Pain Now
I will Defeat, you Little Geeks.. I Detain Clowns
so Yeild to Me.. or Feel the Heat
goddamit.. I'm the King better Throne Me
you a Fiend & a Phony.. got the League wanna Clone Me
plus you Teens is a Team full of Queens & Jabronis

ima Burn Em.. im Determined.. they the Fakest
you kids Low-Rated, im more like Most Hated
I leave you Hoes Naked, in places where Those Baited
my Flow Sacred, its No Faking, im So Blazing
so flow much Heat thru my Lungs it Feels my Throat Baking
I Smoke Greatness, & Flame those call me Mister Rot Crews!
Exchange Blows, & Gut Fuck ya bitch with the Same Sword
that Sephiroth Use

*Audio Maybe*

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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 10:02 pm
by - Mutual -
nice peice man
stayed on point
nice multies i liked it 8.5/10

and I Feel the Breeze... and the Pain Now
I will Defeat, you Little Geeks.. I Detain Clowns
so Yeild to Me.. or Feel the Heat
goddamit.. I'm the King better Throne Me
you a Fiend & a Phony.. got the League wanna Clone Me
plus you Teens is a Team full of Queens & Jabronis

my fave bit^
keep'em comin

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 10:05 pm
by Frank Black
thanks man Bump!

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 11:35 pm
by Scip
i was feelin this more than ur collab with mutual (no hate)

ur flow was alright, multies were alright...sorta got a style like lil wayne...ur punches are said or you make a slight connection with words but they aren't like hard...ur multies were decent helped make the flow better but at some spots ur flow was tough to read and rough around the edges...no doubt tho this was decent...keep spittin


a Hound Bless ya with Gats, so my crews is Comin' Violent
& like Sex when the Kids Sleep, You dudes is Fuckin' QUIET!
Your game Pick it Up, nvm bitch you suck, GIVE it UP!
My Style? Sick as Fuck, but like sex changes ima SWITCH IT UP!

^^Best Part in the whole thing

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 11:48 pm
by Frank Black
thanks homie!

Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 7:28 am
by MesaR
yeah this was a nice little drop for your first one on here, deff seen better but looks like you can hold your own, everything was straight not much i can really hate on, and word i liked this drop better then the one with mutual aswell.. keep up sdotw.

Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 1:14 pm
by Haz
Nice Shit My Dood..
i Disagree With ya flow Bein Aiight
i Thought Ya Flow Was On Point

You Had Some Nice Punches
LoL @ Da Fuckin Quiet Punch.
I Said Some Shit like 'Like havin Sex Wit nerds U Doods is Fuckin Geeks'..
You Deffo Had ya Multis Down To..
Good SHit My Niggah Keep It Comin... And i Agree i Liked This More
Then Ya Collab Verse.. Stay up

Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 1:44 pm
by Çhåiñ$âw
Yea man, this drop was hot. There were a few minor falloffs in your flow, but nothin major. Threw some sick punches, and kept the structure tight with the multies. I'm feelin it.

Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 4:54 pm
by Frank Black
thanks yall

Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 6:57 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
nice puns, multis were koo, structure overall was straight, audio would make it a bit more interesting, good shit tho

Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 12:11 am
by Frank Black
thanks

Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 5:34 am
by Omega Bill
Nice shit man. Ya'll newcomers are really proving right off the bat you can really hold your own here.

Overall - Good drop. I caught onto the flow, people who can't catch the flow prolly aren't switching how it sounds outloud compared to just reading it in their head, like you said it's for audio, so it's meant to be read aloud and when you do that you can catch the flow.

Solid drop man. I'll be waiting for your next one.

Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:22 pm
by Frank Black
thanks yall!!