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Somethin never used.

Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 3:41 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/water ... t9520.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/broke ... t9645.html

This was suppose to be a collab with me, viral, and kurse but it never happened, i dont believe there was even a beat for this, figured i'd post it since i'll probably never use it(dont intend to)

smoke been spittin-against-this, my flows rippin-ya-senseless,
i'll be skippin-the-entrance when the scriptin-commenses,
my teaching's unknown like a hidden-apprentice,
my style's flippin-relentless, reversin shit-in-a-sentence,
so these sentences-spitten must be relentlessly-written,
when i have poison bars mirrored back like my reflection-was-speakin,
i'm infectin-the-season to start killin by inventin-a-reason,
n that reason is to begin provokin-a-theft,
no holdin-ya-breath, i've stolen-wat's-left so u start chokin-to-death,
have u sniffin crystals like i turned ya coke-into-meth,
lyrically broken-the-vets, now we hopin-to-bet,
that my next punch will straight up open-ya-head,
have ya brains stickin out so i can read-ya-mind,
so sick with rap, i can breathe-a-rhyme,
i'll step on ya back to crush-n-squeeze-ya-spine,
see smoke'll fuck u up like dust-n-weed-combined,
now trust-in-me-to-find a fuckin-beat-designed to feed-the-blind,
words of literature that illustrate in the art-of-rap,
so deadly it'll stop ya cardiac like a heart-attack,
i'll tear up the parts-ya-lack with the scars-to-match,
AME with the bars-attached, only way out is death,
so before i start-to-check like an architect,
i'll have kurse strangle u till he marks-ya-neck

Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 4:56 pm
by - Mutual -
nice flow
nice multies
stayed on point
8/10
i liked it

n that reason is to begin provokin-a-theft,
no holdin-ya-breath, i've stolen-wat's-left so u start chokin-to-death,
have u sniffin crystals like i turned ya coke-into-meth,
lyrically broken-the-vets, now we hopin-to-bet,
that my next punch will straight up open-ya-head,

my fav bit^
keep'em comin

Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:59 am
by Ambiguous Realm
appreciate it

Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:05 am
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
This Drop Was Good Fam ..
Multies Were On Point As Usual ..
Flow Was Good ..
Punches Weren't That Hard Hittin ..
But it Was a Nice Piece Tho ..

Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 3:22 pm
by Arvincible
Dope.

I thought u died.

Good shit. Multis nd complexity are 9/10.

Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 8:26 am
by HKX
shit was nice nigga u should've recorded dat shit but hey fuck it its better if u wrote 2 a beat n e wayz shit was nice homie

Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 10:34 am
by Scip
nice flow

nice multies

everythings on point

fellas not everything needs punches...writtens can be writtens bout anything...idk i just dont see some writtens havin punches in em...its whatever tho

good shit e

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